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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: Deck the Halls 14 Apr 2021 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm happy snape is getting rid of the scar btw it's brilliant! That's literally the only way people know to recognize harry potter. He should do some legal stuff though at least in the muggle world, else old manipulative dumbledore will happily come in and screw stuff up to fit his plans
Title: Deck the Halls 21 Dec 2009 1:29 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Please please carry on and make this alonger story I love the harry related disasters he is super thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks and here's another harry related disaster for you to read, LOL!
Title: Deck the Halls 21 Dec 2009 5:48 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    lol Severus really doesn't know not at all.
    Glad that harry got better! Wonder what would happen if the medi-witch knew it was Severus and Harry a year ago, but then it waaaas a year ago. >_>

    Happy Holidays!

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes and that's really too long for a doctor to remember a man she saw for five minutes with his head sticking out of a fireplace.

    No, he doesn't but he's going to find out. See the next chapter!

Title: Deck the Halls 21 Dec 2009 4:46 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    You wrote this very true to life. my son ate a quarter once and I was terrified. It's such a frightening thing when your child is sick or hurt. Great job and please post more soon! I need my Christmas fix!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I actually have posted more!  I agree a sick child is really scary, your own or someone else's.
Title: Deck the Halls 21 Dec 2009 4:40 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, poor Harry! So glad he's gonna be all right. I'm loving this so don't stop writing. This story is so addictive, probably cause I can relate since I've got two boys at home just like little Harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks you're sweet! Here's some more for you.
Title: Deck the Halls 21 Dec 2009 4:33 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, such a good chapter! You wrote everything perfectly and I'm looking forward to more. I would happily read this over and over so don't end it too soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks and here's more!
Title: Deck the Halls 20 Dec 2009 6:48 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I never knew that holly was poisonous. Thank you for educating me :) Mila

    Author's Response: You're welcome, I knew the berries weren't good for people to eat but not that they made them so sick and could kill you until I researched it. And now you can read some more of Harry's mishaps.
Title: Deck the Halls 20 Dec 2009 5:43 pm
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad it's longer than intended. I'm really enjoying this story. Yes, the terrible twos will turn into the trying threes and the frightening fours... you get the picture. Somehow I knew that Harry was going to eat the berries when you mentioned hunger and the birds. It's something a two year old would do, most definitely. My niece ate a quarter when she was that age. After that she wouldn't touch those chocolate coins that come out at Christmas.

    Loved the chapter. I can't wait for more.

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, I know exactly what you mean, I have 11 nieces and nephews and I watched all of them and lived with four of them for a long time and then I taught preschool--yes, I am insane. I've had them stick beads up their nose, swallow an alphabet magnet, and light a basement on fire. And one of my students smacked another kid in the head with a Tonka truck and nearly knocked the poor girl out. Then I got bit by the psycho kid from hell. It's at those times that I really sympathize with Severus getting all snappy with his students.

    And here's a new chapter for you!

Title: Deck the Halls 20 Dec 2009 3:35 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Merlin, any parent's worst nightmare, seeing your child sick and not knowing what to do. At least in this story there are competent healers.

    I love the part with Harry drawing and trying to decorate, while naughty it was meant with a good heart. I would have like to see Severus at least seeing the effort and after Harry scrubbed it off, helping him with some decorating.

    Love this chapter... looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    Actually, they did do that, I just didn't mention it.

    I know it really is, when I was watching my niece at 18 mos. she had a seizure and I nearly died I was so scared thinking it was my fault, but it wasn't. She developed a really high fever from a flu suddenly and it spiked causing a seizure but I will never forget how scared I was. I think the 911 people thought I was going to have a breakdown.

    And now here's more for you.

Title: Deck the Halls 20 Dec 2009 8:51 am
Reviewer: Lina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww, I just love this story it's so realistic and beautiful, I can't wait for more. You have a great talent and I'm grateful you chose to share it with us. ^_^

    Author's Response: Thanks so much you've made my day and here's more for you!

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