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Title: Deck the Halls 20 Dec 2009 8:34 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's unfortunate that such a pretty plant has berries that are poisonous. One must always take care to keep them out of reach of curious young ones. At least Harry now knows that they aren't good to eat and will avoid eating them. It could have been much worse and he is lucky that they caught it in time.

    I'm glad that they didn't punish Harry overly much about his drawings on the walls. He was truly only trying to help and isn't quite old enough yet to really understand why it's against the rules. A good solution is to designate a wall in the child's room for just those kinds of artistic endeavors, one with washable paint. There is even a special paint that allows a wall to be used as a chalkboard.

    I must say I am glad that this story has blossomed so much. It's wonderful and I'm really look forward to seeing what comes next. Keep up the fabulous writing!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks and you're absolutely right. That's why Lily made the art wall for Harry in Where Shadows Go.

    No, they wouldn't have especially not after the scare he gave them by almost dying.

    Harry really does know better now and will never eat anything like that again.

    And now the next chapter is up!

Title: Deck the Halls 20 Dec 2009 8:32 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I love harry with sev and augustus. Terrible twos is right, can't wait for next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much I just updated!
Title: Deck the Halls 20 Dec 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for explaining the Henry Harry thing for me

    Wow Harry talks very good for a two and a half year old. I'm glad Harry is better. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: He does and you're welcome!
Title: Deck the Halls 19 Dec 2009 8:39 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I love this story! It's awesome!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapter is now up!
Title: Deck the Halls 19 Dec 2009 8:11 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor little Harry. Glad that the little imp is okay though.

    I think that Sev has no idea what he's in for with this cute little troublemaker.

    I can't wait to see more of Harry's burgeoning magic. Very interesting.

    Great chappie Snapegirl, and I'm glad that you've made this into a longer piece.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, what a relief, LOL!

    No, he doesn't.

    Now you can, because I've just posted again.

    Me too, since I'm having so much fun with it.

Title: Deck the Halls 19 Dec 2009 6:57 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    i love this story

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Deck the Halls 19 Dec 2009 6:38 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter. This is such a nice Christmas Present for all of your readers! Thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really am glad you're enjoying this and I like writing as a Christmas present.
Title: Deck the Halls 19 Dec 2009 6:30 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked the chapter, but who leaves a 2.5 year old unattended and unsupervised?

    Author's Response: Well, he was supposed to be in the garden for a bit and I guess Hotspur thought Augustus was watching him after that. It was an oversight, but it happens. You turn your back and the next thing you know, your kid's into something. One time my little niece was sitting in the kitchen playing with her dog while her mom cooked, she put something in the oven and looked down to see why her dog was barking and found her two-year-old eating the dog's food! At that age some of them are like whirlwinds.

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