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Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 15 Jul 2011 5:36 pm
Reviewer: Lil Sev (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm sorry, but I have to point this out. According to the date you put up at the beginning, it's only been about 2 weeks since the last chapter, so Harry would still be two. I think you meant to make it 1984.
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 09 Jan 2010 7:21 am
Reviewer: Kaasan (Signed) [Report This]
    Just a small thing really, but in January 1983 harry would still be 2 1/2 years old because he was born July 1980. Other than that this is a great story! keep up the great writing!!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I didn't realize I made a mistake with the date.
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 25 Dec 2009 12:44 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    lol I was just about to ask you if it really works but you've already answered it. Too bad I can't use it since the kid my great-aunt takes care of doesn't speak English :(

    Harry is so bad lol and cute! Poor Severus :P

    And Grandpa is wondering, I wonder for how long though...MERRY XMAS!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks and the same to you! :)

    Just wait till you see what happens in the next chapter! It's up now and will soon be followed by another!

Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 24 Dec 2009 6:43 am
Reviewer: teddybear (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW!! I liked the part about Harry have the tantrum and what he did. That was great. I'm going to have to remember that for when I watch my friend's kids.

    Author's Response: Thanks and it really does work1 Hope you like the next chapter!
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 23 Dec 2009 2:39 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this whole chapter. The tantrum was handled well, I've been through many a store with a whiny toddler and know just how it feels.

    The snowman theme really got to me since I love them and would love it if one came to life! Too bad I don't have magic!

    Author's Response: Me too! I'd love to! Thanks for reading.
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 23 Dec 2009 2:31 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant1 Loved the snowdog and the way Harry made it come to life and also how Severus dealt with his cranky son. This story is so good!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 23 Dec 2009 2:24 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    So cute! What a wonderful story! Harry really is a strong wizard! And Severus handled that tantrum perfectly. I've done the same. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you, glad to know that.
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 23 Dec 2009 12:05 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter I really felt for Severus with the tantrum we have all been there with 2 year terrors!

    Author's Response: Oh yes, we sure have and here's another one for you to enjoy!
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 22 Dec 2009 9:55 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhhhh the joys of taking toddlers to the toy store! Every parent has gone through that trial and I feel for them every time. Severus handled Harry perfectly. Spanking a child who is having a tantrum rarely works, but using embarrassing comments almost always does. This way Harry got to decide for himself that his behavior was inappropriate and the lesson is much more likely to stick with him. Hopefully, he will never behave like that again. (Wishful thinking, of course xD)

    Well, Harry certainly chose a wonderful and exciting way to announce his magical abilities, didn't he? I really liked how Severus handled the 'loss' of Snowflake. This way Harry won't be too sad about the demise of the snow dog.

    I wonder if Severus will ever come clean about Harry's true parentage? I really believe that Augustus will understand and accept Harry no matter what.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Harry has a streak of naughtiness coming up in chapter ten.

    He did, but then he's Harry.  Yes, Harry won't be too sad.

    You could be right, but Severus is very cautious and eventually he might tell him, or Augustus might just figure it out himself.

    Thanks so much!

Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 22 Dec 2009 8:57 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this story, and kudos for your sisters and sevs way of handling a tantrum. Nothing works better than treating a "big boy or girl" as a baby. Of course you die of embarrasment as its going on. Please post soon!

    Author's Response: Oh yes, you do! Thanks for reading!

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