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Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 22 Dec 2009 5:24 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this was just the sweetest story! :) I really like how you've tweaked the canon events and I really like the characterization of Severus Snape here. He's not the nasty Potionsmaster from Hogwarts, but he's still a bit snarky and grumpy at times. Best of all, he knows what joy is, unlike his canon counterpart. And little Harry is adorable!

    I loved his first bout of accidental magic! I do hope that you are able to add more to this story over the Christmas holidays.

    Well done!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much! I just posted a new chapter and am working on the next one tonight.

    This was what I imagined Sev would be like if he had never been a DE, and had been able to not be torn apart by Lily's rejection of him.  Yes, he does, because Harry is there to teach him. Merry Christmas!

Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 22 Dec 2009 3:39 am
Reviewer: Ash (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great chapter. I found myself wishing with Harry that the dog could stay - it was a great case of accidental magic, probably one of the best I've seen written.
    The tantrum was great too as Snape dealt with it perfectly. I think that's the only way to handle it. My friend has a child who was prone to this as a toddler - she'd throw herself on the floor next to the girl and start imitating her - cured her of tantrums after a few of those!
    Anyway, great chappie, really enjoying the story!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I can see where that would work, but Severus wasn't about to humiliate himself in public that way, LOL!

    Thanks and I hope you enjoy the next part, which I've just posted.

Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 22 Dec 2009 2:53 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely chapter. I really enjoyed Harry's tantrum and how Snape dealt with it. Yes, public humiliation does work for toddlers. My mom used to throw a fit right along with us and we'd be so embarrassed that we would quit. Parents are so good at that.

    I loved the snow dog. It's too bad that Snape isn't a dog person. A naughty little Crupp might be the best thing for Harry's energy.

    Thanks for the great chapter. I enjoyed it immensely.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much and you're right about the humiliation part. I found it works wonders, even on teenagers, LOL!

    You're right, but I think between Harry and the dog Severus might end up in a mental hospital. Hope you enjoy the next two chapter I posted! :)

Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 21 Dec 2009 9:10 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh little Harry is so cute, ive used that tantrum technique on my nephew before, worked perfectly lol :)

    Author's Response: Yay! everus has done good. I just posted two new ones for you to read!
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 21 Dec 2009 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww what a great chapter I loved it!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 21 Dec 2009 8:38 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Snow days are fun. :) Little Harry is so cute. It scared me when he was yelling and told Severus that Severus wasn't his Papa. I liked Snowflake the snowdog. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks and yeah I like snow so long as I don't have to go anywhere in it. That can be scary especially if someone might have called the Aurors thinking Sev was kidnapping Harry. What  a mess that would have been.
Title: Frosty the Snow . . .Dog? 21 Dec 2009 6:25 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I loved this chapter! A snow dog!!! What a wonderful idea. Severus really needs to let Augustus in on the secret. I honestly don't think the "old man" would turn Harry out, expecially with where Severus found the poor babe...This story has been such a wonderful present for the holidays. Thank you.

    Author's Response: You're so welcome! I agree, Augustus wouldn't, but Severus is like a clam, it takes a lot to pry him open and I think he's scared he might lose Harry if anyone knew his secret.

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