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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: Where are you Christmas? 10 Jan 2010 8:13 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's good that Harry now understands that Christmas is about giving, not receiving, and about wishing good for others. Augustus' idea was quite excellent and allowed Severus to teach Harry this important lesson.

    Well...Augustus definitely realizes that Harry IS the same child as the missing Harry Potter, though he assumes that he is biologically Severus', which of course isn't true. And Severus is still scared to tell Harry and Augustus the truth. Time is running out and he needs to unburden himself and soon.

    Author's Response:

    yes, that was an important lesson for Harry--or any child--to learn and he was lucky he had such caring adults to teach it to him. 

    Yes, Augustus does have a few misconceptions there, but Severus could clear them up once he makes up his mind to get over his fear of being rejected and just bite the bullet and tell Augustus the truth.  Thanks so much for reading!

Title: Where are you Christmas? 10 Jan 2010 5:46 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this Christmas chapter. :) Keep up the good work and please update again ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and I have updated! Hope you like the next one!
Title: Where are you Christmas? 10 Jan 2010 4:12 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, that was really sweet! The Grinch and Dickens put into one chapter - not a bad feat! It's nice that Augustus came up with this idea - it shows that he actually learned from the spanking incident at understands that there are better ways to teach children than beat it into them!
    I hope that Severus'll learn to trust his Grandfather and share that burden with him - he might even be able to help him with a solution, he's a powerful and clever man after all with many connections. And he loves Harry and Severus and will do everything for them, I'm sure! Poor Severus, to have to walk around with this waiting for the other shoe to drop...
    I love this story, it'S really great, as all your work usually is!

    Author's Response: Thanks very much for your kind review.  Yes, Augustus is not a stupid man and he does regret what he did to Harry that long ago day.  He does love both his grandson and Harry and would do whatever it took to make sure they were safe and happy, he takes his duties to his family very seriously. He could indeed help Severus out once Sev confides him, but that won't be until two chapters from now. 

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