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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Wow Harry is brave to give Mr. Smithers a gift, good to know he's growing up to be an awesome lad :D I loved Sev's familiar! Can't wait to see more of her! Next chapter...uh-oh and Neville always wanted for christmas? >_> uh his parents to have gotten cured? and sev tells augustus....i think his reaction would be thank you for telling me i already knew lol! but why didn't you tell me....*sev gives his answer* --silence-- XD
I've been enjoying your story so far. It's really good! to be honest, I totally forgot about Smithers. xD Sev's familiar's pretty awesome...where do you get these ideas? I think Augustus will take it pretty well. After all, he suspects it, right? Though I think he'll definitely want to kill the Dursleys'...and maybe Dumbledore too. hope I'm right! =) keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter! ~shige
Veleska seems to be the perfect choice for Severus. It's clear that she decided that Severus was worthy of her immediately and I don't think it was because Augustus chose her specifically for him; she is far too intellegent to simply do as she is told. I'm sure she read his heart (all animals can tell if you are a good person) and accepted him as her master. I'm glad that Severus is going to finally tell Augustus the truth and I hope that Harry won't be hurt too badly. My guess is that Augustus will have mixed feelings. He might feel a bit hurt, angry, and disappointed that Severus didn't trust him with the truth sooner, and proud, understanding, and most of all love for all that Severus did to give Harry the best life possible despite the lack of blood relation. Blood or not, Harry IS a Snape! Many of the things that Severus did will finally make sense to him and I'm sure that he will do all that is in his power to help them. Great chapter! Author's Response: Yes, I feel bad for Smithers too. It's a terrible thing to have happen and hopefully Harry will be able to help him heal. All it takes is a little kindness sometimes. She really is and she knew that SEverus was her master because she could sense his inner nature, and that's why she agreed to bond with him. All animals can sense whether o not a person is good or bad. You're right, Augustus would feel that way and Harry is a Snape in all ways save one. |
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