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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: White Christmas 18 Sep 2022 10:31 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am in love with Augustus Prince (in my head he's always been Severus Prince), he's exactly as i always imagined Snape's grandad to be. I also am very, VERY happy about his idea of justice. I'm sick of revenge nonsense, it's bullshit and makes you no better than the people that hurt you, but justice. I go for justice, because it's less personal and more structured, like law, because without law there is no order and without order there is no safety.
Title: White Christmas 16 Jan 2010 5:04 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    another great chapter, my dear. and congrats on being Featured with theis wonderful story.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and so glad you liked it!
Title: White Christmas 15 Jan 2010 7:11 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    I forgot to say congrats on your award--this story so deserves it, it's the best Christmas story ever! And there's a new chapter--have to go read it! YIPPEE!

    Author's Response: Thanks, please do!
Title: White Christmas 15 Jan 2010 6:51 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow what a chapter! The ice skating was awesome, I love how Snape's powers are turning out and I also liked the Christmas with the Longbottoms. The puppy peeing on Augusta's shoe was hilarious.

    And I'm glad Augustus understood and forgave Severus his deception. Somehow I doubt Harry will take it as well.

    Oh and congratulations on your award!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks and I've just posted again!

    Read to find out if you're right about Harry!

Title: White Christmas 15 Jan 2010 6:41 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww such a great chapter. Those kids are something else! I loved how Augustus took the news and can't wait to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: Yes they are, but they're typical kids.  I'm glad you're enjoying this!
Title: White Christmas 15 Jan 2010 4:59 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the ice skating scene it was really funny! That Blaise is as bad as Harry!

    And the kids getting Nev a dog . . .why am I not surprised? Kids think nothing of that sort of thing and Sev reciting the alphabet was funny.

    Yay, I guessed right!

    I think Harry will be shocked and angry at first and then calm down and realize that Severus finding him was the best thing that ever happened to him.

    Congratulations, you deserve it!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks and you are so right. Kids act first and then think later. 

    Check out the next chapter to see if you're right.

Title: White Christmas 14 Jan 2010 11:51 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank goodness the truth is out can't wait for Harry's reaction! Loved the skating episode and the puppy of course i hope we get to see him again. Thank you for updating

    Author's Response:

    You will see him again in the next chapter and also Smithers and Sandra.  Plus some new people.  I love the skating too. I wish I could skate like Severus, LOL!

    Here's the next chapter for you and be warned . . .it is longer than this one! Hope you enjoy it!

Title: White Christmas 14 Jan 2010 5:02 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw so glad that Augustus reacted that way, I suspected that he wouldnt have a problem with it but you never know with these fanfic authors ;) I really hope that Harry takes it well, I cant see why he would have a problem being an intelligent child that ought to have good self esteem and a sense of worth from living with Severus and Augustus for so long. Loved Nevilles gift too, that puppy sounds and awful lot like mine that has also given chewing metal (as well as everything else!) a good try lol :)

    Author's Response:

    LOL!

    he should take it well . . .unless something happens and he gets angry. 

    OMG, your dog chews metal?? Heaven help you! Mine only chewed furniture and that was bad enough. Your dog sounds like my friend's Lab who ate the leg off her kitchen table.

    Hope you like the next chapter I've posted!

Title: White Christmas 14 Jan 2010 7:06 am
Reviewer: MP (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You are an amazing storyteller.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!
Title: White Christmas 14 Jan 2010 5:07 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    haha that was awesome, potions alphabet ^^
    it was a bit awww when you take it from augustus's side because you feel his hurt from severus not believing in him. but it's good that they both understand each other better and forgive.
    now next is harry...though i fear what is going to happen, i just have a bad feeling...i just hope i'm wrong.

    Author's Response:

    yeah that potions alphabet was a blast! Poor Sev, LOL!

    You're right, you do feel how hurt Augustus was but he knows that Sev meant well and he will alwats love them both.

    Read the next chapter and find out . . .you never know!


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