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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: We Three Kings 04 Feb 2010 11:04 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the Dursley scene and of course the Severus Sandra romance thank you for updating
Title: We Three Kings 28 Jan 2010 11:19 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    The talk between Sev and Augustus was kind of predictable. Dursleys definitely got what they deserved! I wonder if you will use the twist and let someone notice and tell Albus... Mila
Title: We Three Kings 28 Jan 2010 7:51 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay so good to see that they got what they deserved! I liked the talk between Augustus and Severus too :)
Title: We Three Kings 28 Jan 2010 7:06 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter! Augustus gave Severus good advice and I hope he takes it. And the revenge on the Dursleys was perfect. What a heartless creature Petunia is! And Vernon too. The only good ones in that family seem to be Marge and Dudley.
Title: We Three Kings 28 Jan 2010 7:02 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! Fantastic that they got what they deserved and how. They got away with abuse in the books. I liked how you had Augustus urge Sev to date too. Wonderful!
Title: We Three Kings 27 Jan 2010 10:09 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Now that Harry knows what was done to him when he was a baby, he can let it go and continue with his life. As Marge mentioned, Petunia and Vernon could have simply taken him to an orphanage if they didn't want him. There was no excuse for the cruelty of their actions. I hope they enjoy their incarceration! :D

    It would be good if Harry and Dudley were able to establish some kind of relationship. They are of an age and perhaps they can become friends. It would be for Harry to have contact with the muggle world and it wouldn't hurt for Dudley to have contact with the Magical as well.

    I agree with Augustus that it's far past time for Severus to get on with his life. I understand that Severus was in love with Lily, but she married someone else and has been dead for years. Sandra is a lovely woman and it will be good for Severus to get out of the house.

    Great chapter!
Title: We Three Kings 27 Jan 2010 8:37 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY! Dursleys are gone! Kinda...
    I hope Dumbledore doesn't notice, and that Dudley and Harry can get along.
    The TALK btwn Sev and Augustus was funny XD I don't know why it was for me.
    Severus is gonna be with Sandra? ooo this I gotta see XD
Title: We Three Kings 27 Jan 2010 7:39 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Finally, the dursley's pay! I love it when the dursleys get theres, Great chapter.
Title: We Three Kings 27 Jan 2010 5:11 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice. Couldn't have happened to more deserving people.
Title: We Three Kings 27 Jan 2010 12:49 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Good Job! I liked the part with Harry and Dudley. :-D

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