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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: Joy to the World 07 Dec 2010 3:54 am
Reviewer: iloveseverus (Signed) [Report This]
    Will you be making a sequel? That would be amazing if you did! And if you have already could you tell me what it is called because I can't find it anywhere!

    Author's Response: I am planning on it. Don't know when I shall get to it however. I will let you know when I do!
Title: Joy to the World 08 Aug 2010 10:39 am
Reviewer: raine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    lovely, just lovely. And very touching.
Title: Joy to the World 18 Jul 2010 9:54 pm
Reviewer: RemusCDLupin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was extremely well done. Your plot was original and refreshing, your caracterizations were well thought out and excecuted and your conclusion complete and logical. You did a marvolous job and I commend you for it. (The lower than ten score was for a few grammer and spelling things that kind of threw me out of the flow of the story, if I could have I would have given you a 9.8 for that instead of a straight nine)
Title: Joy to the World 04 Jun 2010 3:02 am
Reviewer: lantana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Stunning story. Moving, well-written, original.... I loved it!
Title: Joy to the World 26 Mar 2010 12:39 am
Reviewer: Slythindor (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this story. It was great you go from shock, to laughter, to sobbing and right back again. I hated to see it end, if you decided to write a sequel that would be awesome. Thank you for sharing your gift and great job.
Title: Joy to the World 10 Mar 2010 10:36 am
Reviewer: RangeMan007 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay, so sue me I was hoping just for a second Sandra might have passed on to the next adventure while the kid made it. She might have shown a little backbone in the letter and I had hope, but I suppose it was not meant to be for me. No love for Sandra, whose name by the way, morphed into Sasha and Sarah a couple times. I dunno what's with that. The rest of it though, was very good! A-One Excellent.
Title: Joy to the World 24 Feb 2010 5:33 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I finally got the leisure time to finish reading your wonderful story. My 12-year-old daughter has been reading it too, and we both love it. :) AUs are so much fun to read when written as well as this one is.

    I fell in love with Augustus, and cried when he died taking out Voldemort. You made him such a real character! I felt like I could walk around a corner and I could discover him in my garden (He'd probably be appalled at my brown thumb!). Sandra is someone I'd like to get to know as a friend. So nice to see a Severus Snape who made a different choice and ended up with such a fulfilled life! Your interpretation of Harry was great too. :)

    From the choice of using carols as chapter titles to your handling of the redeemed Sirius Black (He's always going to have a bit of the Marauder in him even though he does grow up finally), this tale was so very well done.

    And please count me in as one who would like to see a sequel!
Title: Joy to the World 24 Feb 2010 6:58 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    aww lovely ending!
Title: Joy to the World 24 Feb 2010 2:21 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww!! What a great ending!! It made me cry! Can't wait for the sequel. Please do one!
Title: Joy to the World 19 Feb 2010 5:53 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Sirius with Draco, now that would be an interesting thing to see. Maybe you can make a small story about that? I'd love to read it.

    I'm really sad this is over, but it was a brilliant story and I'll be reading it over and over . . .

    I loved Talia and how she got born, another Christmas miracle for our wise man. The ending was beautiful!

    I would love LOVE a sequel!

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