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Reviews For Away in a Manger
I liked the hero death Augustus died. Mila Author's Response: No, this was after the Professor had already sent the letter to SEverus and had left the room by then and returned to her office or her lab so Dumbledore could not implicate her if he hapened to see her. They had already given Harry the round of potions he needed and that's why he was sleeping. Poppy knew what potions she had on hand, but they probably weren't enough and rather than wait for the professor to brew more, she told Sandra what she needed for her patient and Sandra has a stock of potions in her apothecary so she Summoned them for her. I don't think poppy would ever stand there and not treat a patient if she could help it. Harry's burn had been treated by them before Zandra wrote the letter to the Snapes. Soon after that, like minutes, they arrived. The thing Harry was in danger of was the magical drain, and Dumbledore had already been there recently and tried to give some of his magic to Harry but it failed. That's why Sev and Augustus had to do that spell.
I really want to give Dumbledore a swift kick in the rear for his attempt to keep Harry's family from him. It's really a pity that Augustus stopped Severus from giving him frostbite. My gut tells me that Albus had plans to whisk Harry away in a grand scheme to make him into the perfect pawn. I'm sure that he had every intention of taking control of Harry's life. I'm really grateful to Prof. Malfoy for having the mettle to do what was right and not let Albus get away with whatever he was planning. It might well have cost Harry his life if she hadn't. On a better note...the wedding ceremony was lovely and I'm glad that Harry and Severus have finally brought Sandra into their family where she belongs. Great chapter!
But it's for family, I hope Harry won't take it too hard. Also in the hospital wing he called him Harry once :) i hope the horicrux don't apply for voldi cause it would completely suck if he came back....i wonder what are in the memories. unexpected guest? >_< oh man i dunno...dumbledore but he's not unexpected...i want to say dru but she passed on....ugh i dunno Malfoy Sr? XD
i felt bad for sev, but when harry got interested in the books whew lol ur lucky ur son is so open minded lol though he still has some childish remarks, kissing ewww! haha ah head colds are the worst! the only thing i can recommend is sleep 8 hours and around the same time each day it'll make you feel better. hope you get better soon!
That old man certainly knows how to make an exit! Went out with a BIG BANG (haha) Phooey! And I was kinda hoping for more fights between him & Albus too!
First you don't update Return to Prince Manor. Then you're not finished with Two Hawks Hunting. And now you've killed off my favorite character in here! Augustus was my favorite! *tears* You're mean. That's all I have to say. Excellent chapter though.
Harry is going to be impossible to console and lost with mystic gone too. Update soon so i can move past these tears. |
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