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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: Joy to the World 26 Mar 2010 12:39 am
Reviewer: Slythindor (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this story. It was great you go from shock, to laughter, to sobbing and right back again. I hated to see it end, if you decided to write a sequel that would be awesome. Thank you for sharing your gift and great job.
Title: Joy to the World 10 Mar 2010 10:36 am
Reviewer: RangeMan007 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay, so sue me I was hoping just for a second Sandra might have passed on to the next adventure while the kid made it. She might have shown a little backbone in the letter and I had hope, but I suppose it was not meant to be for me. No love for Sandra, whose name by the way, morphed into Sasha and Sarah a couple times. I dunno what's with that. The rest of it though, was very good! A-One Excellent.
Title: Holly and Ivy 10 Mar 2010 5:30 am
Reviewer: RangeMan007 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay Sandra makes me want to GAG seriously. I was so overcome by the gagification process [;)] that I had to let you know. Otherwise, I have been transfixed with reading. Hopefully the Sandra scenes will be minimum. I know why I don't like her; She seems to have no personality other that "Moon-over Sev-ritis." But you can't please everyone so have no heartache over my dislike of Susan..er..Sandra. No, I really did forget at that moment. It bothers me that she is so dismissable, you know? Maybe she gets better in later. Oops, the boss approaches.
Title: Joy to the World 24 Feb 2010 5:33 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I finally got the leisure time to finish reading your wonderful story. My 12-year-old daughter has been reading it too, and we both love it. :) AUs are so much fun to read when written as well as this one is.

    I fell in love with Augustus, and cried when he died taking out Voldemort. You made him such a real character! I felt like I could walk around a corner and I could discover him in my garden (He'd probably be appalled at my brown thumb!). Sandra is someone I'd like to get to know as a friend. So nice to see a Severus Snape who made a different choice and ended up with such a fulfilled life! Your interpretation of Harry was great too. :)

    From the choice of using carols as chapter titles to your handling of the redeemed Sirius Black (He's always going to have a bit of the Marauder in him even though he does grow up finally), this tale was so very well done.

    And please count me in as one who would like to see a sequel!
Title: Joy to the World 24 Feb 2010 6:58 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    aww lovely ending!
Title: Joy to the World 24 Feb 2010 2:21 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww!! What a great ending!! It made me cry! Can't wait for the sequel. Please do one!
Title: Let There Be Peace on Earth 24 Feb 2010 2:20 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    So glad they all got what they deserved and I hope Sev gets his long awaited girl. She'll be so cute!
Title: Joy to the World 19 Feb 2010 5:53 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Sirius with Draco, now that would be an interesting thing to see. Maybe you can make a small story about that? I'd love to read it.

    I'm really sad this is over, but it was a brilliant story and I'll be reading it over and over . . .

    I loved Talia and how she got born, another Christmas miracle for our wise man. The ending was beautiful!

    I would love LOVE a sequel!
Title: Let There Be Peace on Earth 19 Feb 2010 5:51 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Dumb Lucius! And even dumber reporters! I really liked how Sandra spoke to Sirius here and straightened him out.

    He finally did the right thing. Good for him!

    I'm so happy for Lina and Sandra! That part was so funny! I'd love to see Sev with a girl, she'll run rings about him!
Title: Joy to the World 16 Feb 2010 5:15 pm
Reviewer: Lumiere (Signed) [Report This]
    That was absolutely brilliant! Your story is one of my favourite fics ever :) I would faint with happiness if you wrote a sequel ....

    Might it include a bit of Draco for the obsessed of us?

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