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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 15 Dec 2009 5:00 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    A very nice chapter! Mila

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Do You Hear What I Hear? 15 Dec 2009 1:11 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, good idea about the knapsack. My mother made something similar when I was a baby. She got the idea when she and my dad were living in Japan. Great job on Harry's reaction to hurting Snape. Even though it was an accident, a child who has been verbally abused as you've described, would take the situation as their fault. Thanks for sharing this. As for when I want the new chapter... Uh, is tomorrow too soon?

    Author's Response:

    Wow that's really cool! I thought of that idea when a customer came into B & N where I work and had a kind of snugglie on their back with a baby in it.  Yes, that's true. harry has been made to feel that it's always been his fault if something goes wrong. But if he's going to be living permanently with Severus, he'll soon realize that's not the case. 

    I've just posted again!

Title: Do You Hear What I Hear? 14 Dec 2009 11:27 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw love it, Harry is so cute and I love how Severus is with him, if only the actual books had Harry living with him and not those mean Dursleys! thank God for fanfics hehe, cant wait to see more, surely Dumbledore will realise sooner or later that Harry is missing, or maybe not...lol :)

    Author's Response: Yeah wouldn't that be so wonderful!  Well, one never knows about Dumbledore, he can be pretty oblivious when he thinks he's right and he thought it was a wonderful idea to leave Harry on the Dursleys doorstep.  Just updated, in case you haven't gotten the alert.
Title: Do You Hear What I Hear? 14 Dec 2009 8:56 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. I loved that Sev "snuck around" the foster home to see if it was appropriate for little Harry. And that he was able to swallow his pride and ask for help from his grandfater. (I certainly hope that turns out well. . . )

    Thank you for updating durring this crazy time of year--you brighten my day! As for "how soon" well sooner is always better! ;-) but be sure you take time to enjoy the holliday season.

    V.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try and get the next one out as soon as I can. If only i weren't so busy . . .
Title: Do You Hear What I Hear? 14 Dec 2009 6:00 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    What a beautiful chapter! So sweet! Can't wait to see what Sev's grandpa has to say! Hurry and post more!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I have!
Title: Do You Hear What I Hear? 14 Dec 2009 5:48 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    This was great1 I loved how you had Snape give Harry a bath, it was adorable and also the way you had Severus check out the orphanage and then decide to keep Harry. I really hope his grandfather will help him out. Please post soon!

    Author's Response: See the next part for more with Sev's grandfather. Thanks for R & R ing!
Title: Do You Hear What I Hear? 14 Dec 2009 8:35 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this story is awesome!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapter's up now.
Title: Do You Hear What I Hear? 14 Dec 2009 7:04 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww such a sweet story! I love it! I hope Sev's grandfather can help him and then he can tell his boss to go to hell. I loved the bath part too! That was so cute!

    Author's Response: Thanks! The bath part was pretty funny. As for Sev telling his boss where to stick it . . .read the next chapter for that one. :)
Title: Do You Hear What I Hear? 14 Dec 2009 6:53 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Enjoyed the chapter. Shame Harry is still to young to understand all the Severus is trying to do in order to keep him......Severus' boss is an ass.

    Author's Response: Yes Smithers is.  And someday Harry will understand and appreciate all Severus has done for him.  The next chappie's up by the way!
Title: Do You Hear What I Hear? 14 Dec 2009 6:15 am
Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ohhh, you stink! How can you leave a cliffhanger like that? What's going to happen to Severus and Harry?

    Author's Response:

    I know, I'm terrible with my cliffies!

    Read the next chapter I've posted and you'll find out! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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