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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 10 Dec 2009 1:32 pm
Reviewer: Leilia Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my word.

    I love it. This is a superb story idea, and I can't wait to see where all you take it.

    I love the was that you have done Severus, I like watching him try to figure out what to do exactly with this creature that he is now responsible for. Kinda reminds me of the first time I babysat solo. ;-}

    I also love Snape's little one liners, like, "Other people get kittens and puppies for Christmas. What do I get? An abandoned sick baby that happens to be James Potter’s son!"
    I love it. ;-}

    I can't wait to see the next chapter.

    Leilia

    Author's Response:

    Thanks very much! Severus is going to be puzzling out that one for several months. 

    yeah I like giving Sev a tart yet funny sense of humor. 

    You can see the next chapter now as I've just posted it!

Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 10 Dec 2009 8:02 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    lol babies are funny :D

    Author's Response: yes, they sure are!
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 10 Dec 2009 6:22 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! The both of them make me feel really bad. I know what it's like to have a sick child like that, and it's really exhausting especially if you're the only one home with him. And a new parent.

    Severus is doing a good job and I hope he holds it together. He's all Harry has.

    More, please!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying this!
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 10 Dec 2009 5:41 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I can't wait to see what happens next! I felt so tense as Snape was trying to deal with Harry-- probably almost as tense as Snape himself was feeling! You really described the situation realistically, as well as making your readers feel the emotions that Snape experiences.

    Author's Response: Thankas, I always try and put myself into the character I'm writing and think about how I would react or feel and I guess it really worked well.  Hope you enjoy my next chapter as I've updated this!
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 10 Dec 2009 1:23 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Sev, and poor Harry. Very sweet story. I'm looking forward to the next chappie.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've just posted again.
Title: What Child Is This? 10 Dec 2009 1:16 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, this is so sweet. The Durselys are horrible people, who don't deserve any pity.

    I'm glad that Snape found him.

    Author's Response: yes they are and I'm glad Snape found him too!
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 10 Dec 2009 12:16 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor both of them. Wow Harry with auburn hair, interesting. Wow the Dursleys are very cruel. I love your stories. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response:

    Yes, one sick and the other exhausted and running out of patience.

    I wanted  Harry to look almost like Lily in this fic, so as to forstall all the usual, "he looks just like his father" and therefore Snape can't stand him.

    Thanks so much! I really don't like the Dursleys here but then again, you're not supposed to.

    I have just updated!

Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 09 Dec 2009 11:25 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    this is a totally amazing story, I really am enjoying it.

    Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! And now there's more of it to enjoy!
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 09 Dec 2009 5:16 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story so far! You're doing awesome! I do have to wonder though if Severus will lose it.Lol! If he does that can only bring them closer, right?
    Anyway again great job.

    Author's Response: Well, hopefully he won't lose it because that would really scare harry. Please read the newest chapter to see how it turns out.
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 09 Dec 2009 8:26 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great! Ifeel so bad for sev, he is trying so hard. Can't wait to read more. Im glad harry is away from the dursleys.

    Author's Response: Yes he sure is and I've posted again so now you can read some more. He belongs with Severus not those disgusting people!

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