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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 09 Dec 2009 5:31 am
Reviewer: jj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i really really love this story!!! great job. i hope you will update again soon, this is fun. not only a great story, but it also gets me in the holiday mood ;)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks very much and I'm so happy this story makes you get in the holiday spirit. When I started writing it, I had no clue exactly where it was going and that it would be so addicting for me to write. I know I should be working on my other stories but I seem to be hooked on this one.

    I have just updated by the way! Hope you enjoy the next part!

Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 09 Dec 2009 3:39 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    What an adorable story! It's so funny seeing Severus try and take care of a baby and he's doing well for his first time. Harry's so adorable too! He reminds me of my son when he was that age.

    Love the Christmas carol idea.

    Author's Response:

    Aww! That's too sweet!

    Thanks and I hope I can keep doing the Christmas Carol idea for the chapters.  I have recently updated.

Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 09 Dec 2009 3:22 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww this was so cute! I laughed when baby Harry peed on Severus and spit soup all over him. It's what happens when you first babysit. So funny! And I also like how Snape recites potion ingredients when he's running out of patience.

    He's doing a good job for a total neophyte. I hope he gets some help, he really needs it. I sure hope not.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks1 The potion ingredient thing was an idea that came to me unexpectedly.

    He will ge thelp as you'll see in my next chapter, posted now. 

Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 09 Dec 2009 2:43 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that was cute!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've just updated by the way.
Title: What Child Is This? 09 Dec 2009 2:11 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the title and chapter titles. Christmas hymns are some of my favorites.

    Author's Response: Mine too! I'm going to try and find songs for all the chapters if possible.  Hope you like the next chapter!
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 09 Dec 2009 12:31 am
Reviewer: CraftyMomChick (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus, he's trying so hard. You can feel the frustration he's experiencing. And little Harry just wants to be loved. Great chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Yes and I'm so glad you can empathize with both of them. 

    Thanks and see my new update for more story. :)

Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 08 Dec 2009 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    You've just got to feel for poor Sev. A sick baby is NEVER fun--even if it your own and you are well practiced in caring for him. To be a complete novice and a sick baby at that. . . poor guy.

    Loving your story.

    V.

    Author's Response: Yes, you are so very right! Poor Severus. But things will start looking up. Read the next chapter and find out! Thanks!
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 08 Dec 2009 10:23 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    So is Sev going to contact anyone from Wiz World before he completely loses his sanity? I think Poppy would be a good choice.

    Author's Response: Umm . . .you'll find out in the next chapter.  I've just updated it!
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 08 Dec 2009 8:44 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus! He is now finding out just how hard it can be to care for a small child and a sick one at that. I wonder if he is going to tell anyone about little Harry and what those awful people did to him, or will he keep him and raise him in secret? Either way I think he is doing wonderfully, despite his inexperience. He is trying his best to be a good care-giver and giving Harry the attention he needs to grow and thrive. Soon, Harry and he will begin to bond and I so look forward to it.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: You're so right. As for if he'll tell anyone, I haven't exactly decided whether he will or not, but he is slowly starting to bond with Harry and you can see more of it now as I've posted again.
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 08 Dec 2009 8:20 pm
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter, poor Sev. Hope he finds someone to help him.

    Author's Response: You just got to feel sorry for him. He's so overwhelmed.  If you check out the next chapter, you'll see who he finds to help him. Thanks!

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