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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 08 Dec 2009 6:48 pm
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Severus and Harry. There is a learning curve to parenthood, and Severus has started learning. I hope they will settle into a routine because at this rate, Severus will either kill himself or give Harry away. Good job. I enjoyed the chapter immensely.

    Author's Response: Yes, you're absoulutely right.  Harry does need a routine, unfortunately Severus is too exhausted to get him into one right now, since he's not had any sleep in 24 hours. But if Harry stays with him, he'll make sure he has a schedule.  I've just updated, so now you can see what happens next! Thanks for reading!
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 08 Dec 2009 6:27 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL, LOL, LOL! I can so identify with Severus! With twin boys if one got sick the other one did too. I remember banging my head against a wall too at times. And yes, it's a mircle that the human race survived. You'd figure after the very first baby parents would kill it!!!! What's that old say, "Why did God make babies so cute? So you wounldn't kill them!" Great chapter!

    Author's Response: OMG! That's so true! I remember watching my nephews and thinking how does my sister do this EVERY day, especially when they were cranky or sick and I had to give them medicine. I used to end up wearing it like Severus at times. 
Title: Silent Night . . .Sort Of 08 Dec 2009 4:10 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved the chapter..... Poor harry... And poor Severus.... He got weed on and puked on.... haha..... Can't wait for more

    Author's Response: Yeah he's been put through a trial by fire all right and it's still not over! Thanks so much for R & R ing.
Title: What Child Is This? 08 Dec 2009 2:25 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great writing and idea although I can't imagine London ever having deserted streets as it is at its usiest at night sometimes. Looking forward to rading more of this thank you for writing

    Author's Response: Well, it was very late on Christmas Eve and I figured many of the people in that area would be home either asleep or at a party. Thanks forr eading and hope you like the new chapter I've posted.
Title: What Child Is This? 08 Dec 2009 5:43 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! A new one! I'm loving it! It made me gnash my teeth (at the retarded Dursleys) and cry (for poor baby Harry) and smile (when Severus rescues him)

    :D:D

    Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! So glad you liked it! I have just updated too!
Title: What Child Is This? 07 Dec 2009 11:51 pm
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good start. I can't wait to read more. I love stories where Snape didn't become a Death Eater.

    Author's Response: Me too! That's why usually he isn't one in my fics. Thanks for reading and I've just updated. The next part is longer as Severus gets to know Harry.
Title: What Child Is This? 07 Dec 2009 11:36 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww poor Harry! Can we murder the Dursleys??

    They are such evil people!

    I love how you gave Severus a different background and all. I'm sure he will take care of harry, as best he can. Can't wait till the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I know how you feel!

    You won't be waiting long since I just posted again.

Title: What Child Is This? 07 Dec 2009 11:18 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great story! I really hate the Dursleys! So glad Severus found baby Harry and hope all goes well.

    Author's Response: Thanks and here's the next part!
Title: What Child Is This? 07 Dec 2009 5:31 pm
Reviewer: stevie736 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like it so far. Hope to see more soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks so very much! I have just updated again!
Title: What Child Is This? 07 Dec 2009 5:06 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! It is fantastic! I hope that you soon update =o)

    Author's Response: Thanks and I have just updated!

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