wonderful, keep up the good job.
Aww that was great! Dumby got what he deserved and Sirus became a lot better (I never liked him in cannon, but yours is all right-now at least :-D ) Here's how much I like this story, last night I dreamed a rather strange dream that combined this story, the AYLNO universe, and EllaEleneil's AIE story all together...hummm. :-D
Finally the master manipulator gets his due, a long stint in Azkaban! Albus Dumbledore was a fool and he more than deserves what he is getting. I feel bad for Poppy, but as a Healer she still should have fought harder for her patient and honored the oaths she took when she became one. I hope that, at the very least, she has learned her lesson about blindly trusting anyone.
Stupid Lucius and his loose lips! Ugh..poor Harry. It would have been best for him and his family if that little fact had never come out, but I suppose you simply have to live with what you get sometimes. I do hope, though, that the media won't be too invasive in their lives. Harry deserves to have a normal childhood and those piranhas should find some nice cliff to jump off of instead.
I'm glad that Sandra's letter showed Sirius just how immature he was being and the wrongs that he had done to Severus and to Harry. I'm proud of him for swallowing his pride and deciding to be adult about it and apologize. I know that there will probably always be tension between him and Severus, but at least they are now trying to be at least civil to each other for Harry's sake.
How wonderful that Harry is soon to have a sibling to love and, eventually, corrupt. Add to that the miracle of Lina's conception and you have a soon to be full household. Prince Manor is once again getting a new lease on life and it's a really good thing.
| Title: God Rest Ye Merry Gentleman
| 07 Feb 2010 4:08 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Beautiful job on both the obituary/tribute and the poem!
| Title: God Rest Ye Merry Gentleman
| 07 Feb 2010 1:18 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love the scene and the lawsuits with Dumbledore can't wait for the Next chapter
| Title: God Rest Ye Merry Gentleman
| 07 Feb 2010 1:00 am
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| Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed)
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I cried when I read this. It was so moving how you had Harry grieving for his grandfather. The poem was brilliant!
Wow thank you for this awesome chapter. Sirius is free and still a jerk to Severus. Figures. This chapter lightened up my day. I had a frustrating day at work and this chapter put me in a better mood, thank you for that. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
| Title: God Rest Ye Merry Gentleman
| 06 Feb 2010 7:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed)
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Great Great Great chapter!
The memorial service was lovely and the poem by Harry was beautiful. The article was very well done as well.
It was heartbreaking when Harry went searching for Augustus, not wanting to believe that he was gone. I wasn't surprised that Harry blamed himself, but I'm glad that Severus was able to convince him that protecting him wasn't the only reason Augustus made his choice. He would have done it regardless. I have little doubt that Augustus knew what Harry was going through and sent him that dream to let him see that he was in a better place, a peaceful place.
Sirius Black has some nerve, doesn't he? Where does he get off saying such nasty things about Harry's father? As Harry said, Severus rescued him as a baby and raised and loved him for all these years and yet, Sirius expects him to just leave him. What a moron! I'm sure that even if he does go for custody that he won't have a leg to stand on. Their story is more than compelling enough to show that Harry belongs with Severus, blood adoption or not.
Great chapter!
| Title: Holly and Ivy
| 06 Feb 2010 6:42 am
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| Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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I'm glad that Harry thinks for himself and doesn't take Sirius Black's word for anything.
It always seemed rather odd to me in canon, after hearing Black was an escaped convict, Harry took his side immediately and happily agreed to go live with him.
Glad you're having Harry wise up.
Sorry, didn't see the rating scale at first! This is an awesome story!
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