Ooh, interesting start. Evil Harry...I love it. I hope though that Snape can rectify his mistake soon, and save Harry from himself.
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| 08 Dec 2009 5:52 am
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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This was good I am just sorry that it ended. I would love to see you do a evil Harry in this vein. I loved it when he was teaching!
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| 08 Dec 2009 5:46 am
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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| 08 Dec 2009 5:29 am
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| Reviewer: Chetari (Anonymous)
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Great story though I had been really hoping it would be much longer. So I am a little disappointed. But it was still great.
Sigh. That was wonderful, lol. It seems fitting to leave it opened ended like that. I appreciate the upload. This was a great story!
Just read all three chapters. Well done, my emotions went from laughing at first then a little concerned in the second chapter as Harry was getting a bit to manipulative and then at the end when he is given the counter-potion, I felt really bad for Harry. When he said: "You're right, and now you're stuck with the weak Harry. The Harry who takes all your insults, all your belittling, all your snide remarks. This is the Harry who you will never even see because you didn't care to notice anybody but James Potter and the evil Harry. This is me," he finally said, looking up into the man's dark eyes." I just felt Harry's hurt from this man who never really saw the true Harry Potter. I think you ended this really well as Severus should have feel guilty and ashamed of himself. Well done.
Okay, so, I don't want to sound too pushy or anything, but MERLIN'S BEARD! You must update as soon as possible! Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh my! What has Snape gotten himself into?
I really like this story so far. I'm glad you posted two chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks! The last chapter is now up!
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