Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Unveiling of Secrets 19 Mar 2014 4:41 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Enjoying your unique approach to this story! I did notice an incorrect word in the first quarter of this chapter: "clambered" means "climbed". I believe you meant to use "clamored" (to make a loud noise; in this context, they were all talking at once). It's the sentence where Snape says "Enough" in bold-faced italics. (Well, you asked for people to let you know if they spotted errors! Hee!) But the story is great, and I can't wait to find out about the mystery of the mask!
Title: Unveiling of Secrets 24 Dec 2009 11:29 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter. I love Sirius and Ampleforth I wonder if they met in canon that would have been so good.

    Author's Response:

    Hey,

     JK Rowling really doesn't explore her characters. I think she kinda uses them, and then tosses them out. There's a lot of potential in Aberforth, really. But then again, I don't think there was room to explore him in her books. 

    Thanks for reviewing!

    ~shige 

Title: Unveiling of Secrets 24 Dec 2009 12:52 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    brilliant chapter.... can't wait for more
Title: Unveiling of Secrets 24 Dec 2009 8:44 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter. Thank you for the update!

    Author's Response:

    You're welcome!

    And thank YOU for reading&reviewing!

    ~shige 

Title: Unveiling of Secrets 24 Dec 2009 3:30 am
Reviewer: teddybear (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I can't wait to see what is going on with Harry and Severus. Keep it going and I'll keep on reading.

    Author's Response:

    I might have a chapter up tomorrow, I'll have to see. But definitely, keep reading!

    Thanks for reviewing!

    ~shige 


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