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Title: Chapter 1: On a Christmas Eve 22 Dec 2009 3:42 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    That was sweet--Professor Snape does have a heart after all!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    I always thought he did...Have a Merry Christmas P.G!

Title: Chapter 1: On a Christmas Eve 22 Dec 2009 1:18 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Merry Christmas!
    I wish I saw Dumble in that riddiculous attire :)

    Author's Response: lol Wouldn't that have been great? Have a Merry Christmas too!
Title: Chapter 1: On a Christmas Eve 22 Dec 2009 8:32 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great one shot!!

    Merry christmas hun xx

    Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it. Merry Christmas to you too!
Title: Chapter 1: On a Christmas Eve 22 Dec 2009 7:50 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Very sweet and so Christmassy. I wonder if Harry will ever figure out who sent the present to him by the handwritten note. The ribbon was a nice touch, too.

    You did a very good job at keeping both characters in character, and Sev and Harry both got what they wanted for Christmas! Yay! This story is a very self-contained one-shot, so much so that I don't even care to find out if Harry really got socks from Dumbledore for Christmas.

    My only criticism is that opening with dialogue is jarring to the reader. It's best to set the scene with a paragraph or two that grounds the reader. By that I mean setting the scene with some a descriptive passage or a little narrative so the reader knows what's going on from the get go and doesn't feel confused.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it Ella, and thanks for the criticism. I'll look into it. But I'm glad you liked it overall. I had this idea but I just couldn't get it to sound how I wanted to and I ended up rewriting it like four times. But I'm happy you liked it. Thanks for reading!! Still looking forward to your next update! :D
Title: Chapter 1: On a Christmas Eve 22 Dec 2009 6:52 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Looks like Snape finally decided to get into the spirit of Christmas.

    A very heartwarming story.

    Author's Response: Yep. The Ol' Grinch of Hogwarts grew a heart. Thanks for reading!

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