I wished that you would have explained about the leter that the Dursley's got from the Malfoy's.
Plus, I found that Harry was too hyper. He was sooo OOC.
It was a good idea for a story.
this was a wonderful story and i enjoyed every moment of it Harry is quite precious! I love the interaction between Snape and him. Keep on writing
awww this was such a sweet chapter! can't wait to read the next one!
LOVELY!! Absolutely lovely!
aawwwwww how ADORABLE!! i simply loved reading it!!!
Author's Response: Haha - I think I got hit with the cute stick with this one. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
That was lovely. Merry Christmas!
| Title: Christmas Day
| 10 May 2010 12:36 am
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| Reviewer: MissChef (Anonymous)
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Write another one. Please!
Author's Response: I am trying, promise! I have ideas for it, but no time in which to write them!
| Title: Christmas Day
| 06 Mar 2010 10:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Aww...what a precious story. ^.^ Poor Severus, not knowing that first bikes are suppose to be red. Kudos on a job well done.
Author's Response: Thank you ;) And thank goodness Harry was around to inform Severus of the truth :D
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