Why only one chapter - this would be a great start to a nice lengthy story, especially since you did it so well.
Oh, I loved this! The perfect Christmas Eve read! Snape's threat about the books was great, especially considering all he really had to do was Obliviate Harry in the morning! Also, Harry's opinion of the rug was cute, as well as appropriate. Both characters have terrific potential, in case you were considering continuing the story in the future!
Lovely! Thank you and have a wonderful Christmas!
Nicely done. Harry's in for quite the treat in the morning when he's told the truth about his past and his future. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Ahhhh, but now I want more.
Title: Snowfall and Silence
| 24 Dec 2009 11:39 pm
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Reviewer: AvidOne (Anonymous)
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This would be a good start to a chaptered story. Hint hint.....
yup, Harry is going to be alright
WOW! A great Holiday/ Harry Potter story.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked ;)
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