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Reviews For Cause And Effect
Author's Response: Thank-you. I know others have lost their parents and that everyone moves on eventually. I mean, I've gotten on with my life. But every now and then a song will come on the radio or I'll watch a movie or I'll pick up my phone to call her, and it's just a crushing blow all over again. Thank-you for telling me that it will get better, even though I knew that somewhere deep inside. Thank-you. I like the way you said that. "very good writing and although it cannot be enjoyed it certainly grips you". I love that! I don't want people to enjoy this fic, because it is an abusive fic and child abuse should never be enjoyed. And the suicide, which came at me from nowhere, is certainly a slap in the face. Thanks for taking the time to review. It helps me grow as an author. ~dpa06~
This is story so horrible, sad, bitter sweet, but brilliantly described and written. Thank you for the happy end, otherwise I would be really depressed now. I am very sorry for your loss, you must miss your mum terribly. Author's Response: I was horrible, and that's what I was going for. I was in a very angsty mood and I wanted an angsty fic. I did try to balance it out a little with a better ending. I had the beginning and ending worked out in my head with the basic idea of abuse throughout the middle. However, I didn't quite know how I was going to link them all. The suicide was from nowhere; I don't know where it came from. I'm glad you liked it enough to review.
I do miss her. Unbelieveably. I mean, I can't even describe it. I pick up my phone and try to call her all the time. Thanks for your condolences. ~dpa06~
Author's Response: Sad and harsh is kinda what I was going for, but I can't seem to get away from happily ever after endings. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your condolences. That also makes me feel a little better. I mean, I wasn't trying to garner sympathy by adding that at the end of my fic. But I do appreciate when someone says something. Thank-you. ~dpa06~
I'm really sorry to here about your mum, I can't even begin to imagine how awful it must be, thankfully. Author's Response: I was in an angsty mood, so it was a pretty awful fic. I was trying to up the abuse a little, but keep it realistic. And thanks for the condolences for my mom. I've lost family members and friends before, but someone as close as my mom was truly heartwrenching. I mean, I can think of a way to describe it beyond awful. Thanks for reading and reviewing; it helps me as an author. Especially since this is my first Sevitis fic. ~dpa06~
Author's Response: Yeah, I was in an angsty mood and wanted to write something dark and foreboding. However, all of ym stories turn out as happily ever after. Thanks for taking teh time to read and review. I really appreciate it. ~dpa06~
Author's Response: Thank-you! I've been reading here for years, and then suddenly got the bug to write a Sevitis fic. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. ~dpa06~ |
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