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Reviews For Redemption
Title: Chapter 1 11 Jan 2010 7:49 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes please do continue! But what about Snape's wizards vow? Is that annulled because Dumbledore died?

    Author's Response: To be honest, I didn't really give it much thought...maybe I'll touch on that when I continue it. :) Thanks for reading!
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2010 11:25 pm
Reviewer: rosiegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This would work well as a longer story. Hope it becomes one.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2010 4:49 am
Reviewer: Levin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I would love to read more. It's really a brilliant story and I'm quite curious about how they are going to deal with Harrys scar now.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2010 12:30 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I would be very interested in a continued story.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jan 2010 7:22 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    definite interest! I'd love to see how this new understanding plays out.

    I can see Snape's facade breaking under this pressure... of course I have also seen him turn to fury in similar situations.

    BTW: breath is bated, fish hooks are baited.

    Hope to see more!

    K

    Author's Response:

    Oops! I'll go back and fix that later on today. I feel quite stupid, because I knew that and did it anyway. Thank you!

Title: Chapter 1 08 Jan 2010 6:36 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting idea.

    Author's Response: I can't take credit for the idea, since it was a challenge, but thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jan 2010 5:12 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was very good. The ending was perfect; Severus told just enough about himself to look human in Harry's eyes without giving away his biggest mistake. He was perfectly in character, as was Harry.

    I hadn't actually pictured Draco being in this fic, but it was nice to have an explanation for why he chose not to do it. It was nice to see him in a more courageous role for a change, taking a stand against the darkness, no matter how small it is. Sure, he's doing it to save his own hide right now, but if he returns to school, he will have to be brave to face all of his friends who will know what he failed to do.

    I'd love to read more. I think it would be interesting if Snape was to help Harry plan his Horcrux journey, possibly helping him along the way.

    Thank you so much for writing my challenge; you did a wonderful job with it!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! I wasn't planning on having Draco involved either, but he worked his way in. Darn Syltherins. :) If I make it into a longer fic, Snape would definitely be in on horocrux hunting. :) I enjoyed writing it.

     

    -LJ

Title: Chapter 1 08 Jan 2010 3:24 am
Reviewer: SugarQuills (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww the end was so sad, it had me near tears. Harry and Snape finally gain some sort of understanding with each other and that was nice to read.

    I think a longer series would be great. I'd like to know how Harry's and Severus' relationship changes and what will happen to Ron Hermione and Draco.

    -SQ

    Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your feedback!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jan 2010 3:09 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very well done! I'd vote for a longer fic. Snape and Harry are just so darn riveting.

    Author's Response: Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Jan 2010 2:48 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful fic. Severus care for Dumbledore was well shown and I think it would be great to go more into this and see where things lead with Harry and Draco. I think a longer fic would be great.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I was hoping I was conveying his 'human side' well. :)

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