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Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 25 Jun 2010 9:45 am
Reviewer: BreakANew (Signed) [Report This]
    Wha-?

    Author's Response: HAHAH!! Keep on!
Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 24 Feb 2010 9:33 pm
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Sqeee

    Author's Response: XD
Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 16 Jan 2010 10:34 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay!!!! This rocks!!! Hehe, I loved the ending. I also really liked the use of the poem. Good choice. It's a good poem and was used brilliantly. I normally don't like poetry in stories, but it was short, long, and a bit of a foreboding. Nicely done.

    I enjoy your Harry immensely. I find him to be very in character, and more like his book version in the earlier books.

    I was all stressed out when Harry took such a long time to explain to the teachers what happened. Archer could have disappeared by the time they got there, but I suppose it all worked out.

    And now I'm thinking that Snape has been turned into a cloak or something. Wouldn't that be interesting?

    This is a wonderful story so far. Thank you for sharing it with us!

    Author's Response:

    HAHA! You're like the second person that thought Severus was the cloak! XD No, he's not the cloak. But I'm glad you liked Harry in this. I liked Harry a lot better when he was younger and a bit more innocent. But yeah, he's still young, and doesn't know exactly what to do all the time. But it did kinda worked in the end, didn't it?

    And YAY! Thanks. I'm glad you liked the poem. I like the creepiness of some of the old childhood poems. (Is that kinda weird?) But yeah, I wanted to have it foreboding and a bit hopeful. Harry DID see the red sky at NIGHT which meant that things were good. Would have been bad had he seen it in the morning.

    But thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying this so far. Thanks for reading! :D

Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 12 Jan 2010 10:44 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely start to the story thank you

    Author's Response: Welcome! And thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 11 Jan 2010 7:42 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! Cutie snape!! Please update soon. I love the idea of the pocket full of posies for protection. :D

    Author's Response: Ha! You're like the first one to connect that line with like the rhyme! I was so pleased with that, but no one commented on it, so ten points to you! Thanks for the review too! :)
Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 11 Jan 2010 10:12 am
Reviewer: ArcticSeasons (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the second chapter. Poor Harry! One minute he's wishing Severus dead and still hating him something fierce then in the next grieving because Severus saved his life and finding things out about the Potions Master that he didn't know before. I believe I know what happened to Severus and Archer, but I will keep it to myself for now. Please update soon so I can see if I'm right or not.

    And to answer your question: yes, I love winter and snow but it's been to cold to really enjoy it. I live near Rockford, IL so we are in the same boat.

    Author's Response:

    Ah, okay, I think I know where Rockford is. Would you like to take somemore snow? Please? *looks hopeful*

    But no, yeah, Harry's a bit disturbed with everything at the moment. Who wouldn't be? And I'm sure you know what happened, but thanks for keeping it to yourself for the moment. You'll see what happened really soon. Thanks so much for the review! :)

Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 11 Jan 2010 7:55 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    lol please don't tell me Servous is the cloak right he is isn't he...

    Author's Response: WHAT?!? HAHAHA!! XD No, I can safely tell you he's NOT the cloak...but that's all I can say. Thanks for this review, it just made my morning!
Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 11 Jan 2010 7:30 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. He's so clearly freaked out about the whole situation. I hope the potions do their work while he sleeps so in the morning he can think with a clearer head. *Hugs Harry*

    I knew they were going to find Sev. Though I have to admit you threw me off with Archer. I was like so he's just unconscious and Ivy mislabeled her story? lol. I can't wait to see what happens now. Lovely chapter.

    Oh and *sends Ivy a warm breeze* We're supposed to get up in the 50s tomorrow and the 60s by the end of the week. Blah. Too warm to melt snow. =( Although, Mardi Gras and its like three weeks of parades are coming up, so the warmer weather will be good for those. Also, have a good first day of class. Mine start tomorrow. Blah. lol. Though, I am excited about my mythology class.

    Author's Response:

    OOOO!! You have a mythology class? That sounds so cool!! *jealous* AND you have warm weather? *green eyed moster comes out* You know, you can always just come up here and take all my snow. I wouldn't mind. Heck, I'll help you shovel it all up! But I suppose good weather's important for the big Mardi Gras.

    *Teehee* I realize now that I've been throwing EVERYONE off with things, which is kinda funny because I didn't know I was doing it until I got reviews. But yeah, no mislabeling here. ^_^ And Harry will have an interesting morning, let me tell you...Thanks so much for the review, Ella! And I'll try to actually pay attention in history and theology! XD

Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 11 Jan 2010 5:36 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I feel like anything is possible now! Is that Snape under the cape somehow? He does know an impressive amount of magic, so I wouldn't be too surprised. Very curious! I'm glad you're making me think!

    I also really enjoyed Harry's panic and emotional state during this chapter. It was portrayed quite realistically. Nice work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Glad you liked Harry in this. I was going for the shell shock affect, him torn between hating Snape, but also not wanting anything really bad to happen to the man. We all wanna kill a teacher at times, right? So that's the side I was going for in the first chapter, but in this, he realize just what would happen if Snape had really died.

    And Yay thinking! It's not illegal, so I'm glad you're using your brain. ^_^ And you'll see what's happening next chapter. Promise. Thanks for the review, P.G.!

Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 11 Jan 2010 5:28 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yikes, I'm more confused now? The fabric had eyes? Or someone was UNDER the fabric? Or Snape is a baby or something now?


    Acck...Hurry up and update soon please!!

    Author's Response:

    Sorry for the confusion, but it should make sense next chapter. Promise! I just like surprises I guess. But thanks for the review to help me get warm! :D


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