| Title: Chapter 8: An Apple a Day
| 07 Jul 2010 7:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Quynce (Signed)
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I love this story...it's like a cupcake left on my desk by a secret admirer whenever a new chapter appears. I hope it won't be taken too personally by the author if I mention that the editing in this chapter is a bit flawed. There are about 4 or 5 spelling mistakes ("ridged" instead of "rigid" for example). It's not too terrible, but I hope the author gets a beta so she can focus on the story rather than worrying about all the details.
Author's Response: Hmmm...really? Sorry about that Quynce! I'll look it over again. But thanks! I'm glad you enjoy the story! Thanks so much for the review!!
| Title: Chapter 8: An Apple a Day
| 07 Jul 2010 10:08 am
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| Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
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Oh, I LOVED the apple shot. Brilliant!
Author's Response: lol Thanks so much cckeimig! :)
Interesting...now I am beginning to really wonder about that potion. Clearly it only really effected his memory and physical body, leaving his magic the same. I wonder what this discovery will mean...?
I wonder what would happen if a barrel full of apples fell on her....xD! I really cannot blame Severus for disliking her....so I say we should encourage more apples to be thrown at her (or better yet, over-ripe tomatoes). I really liked Umbitch's reaction to Dumbledore's comment about learning wand movements in DADA. :D
Author's Response: Haha!! Yes, tomatoes would've been better, but I didn't know any nursery rhymes with tomatoes in it, so apples had to do....at least apples are harder than tomatoes though. lol But glad you liked Dumbles vs. Umbitch. XD And you'll get to discover more about that potion as the story goes along. But glad you liked this chappie. Thanks silver! :)
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