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Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 09 Jan 2010 4:39 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, what an interesting first chapter. Of course, my hope is that Snape blocked the curse and that it bounced back on archer, but one can never be too sure. I wonder who bit the dust...

    What an excellent description of Severus making potions--I think that was my favorite part of the chapter. Excellent work; I can't wait to read more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this first chapter. And yeah, everyone's been worried or mad at me for what I did to Snape. But you'll all see what happens next chappie. And I'm glad that you liked that description. Thanks for the review, P.G.!
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 09 Jan 2010 6:38 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW! that was brill! the whole scene where harry was watching Snape wad me on the edge of m chair! i could acutaly feel the breeze off the potion, and had goose bumps!....Did i say WOW yet?!

    Please! *gets down on my knee's to beg like Lucius to Voldy!*LOL PLEASE update soon!

    Author's Response: O_O Now it's my turn to say wow. I'm so happy you liked this so far! And I really wanted to show that Snape was a powerful wizard even when it came to potions, so I'm thrilled you liked that bit! And I'll see if I can't update very soon. Thanks snapeswidow!
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 09 Jan 2010 5:59 am
Reviewer: ArcticSeasons (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome first chapter to your story. Can't wait for more. Please update soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm glad you liked it. Just a guess, but do you like winter? Your username makes me shiver! lol Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 09 Jan 2010 4:28 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    love how you ended it

    Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it so far!
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 09 Jan 2010 3:42 am
Reviewer: SablePhoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a beginning! And, what a cliff-hanger there. Look forward to more of this story!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it so far! :D
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 09 Jan 2010 2:28 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the beginning xxx

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 09 Jan 2010 1:13 am
Reviewer: LaileeJane (Signed) [Report This]
    OH HELL!!! I'm utterly speechless!!!!! Must...have...more...

    Author's Response: XD I know, it's a bit dramatic for a beginning, but there will be a new chappie up soon. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 09 Jan 2010 12:16 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Send lots of snow, please!

    This is a very intriguing first chapter. I'm curious as to where this is going. I admit, I cheated and read the categories, so while I don't think Severus is dead, I'm waiting to see where you'll take this.

    The part where Harry was watching Severus make that potion was beautiful. The way you described it was cinematic and I could totally picture it in my head. I felt Snape's power and Harry's awe. Too bad Severus couldn't have brewed a potion in class. I bet he'd have a lot more students interested in his subject.

    Be careful when you drive back to school. Remember to give yourself extra time, and most importantly, don't freak yourself out. ;)

    Author's Response:

    Yay!! You can have ALL the snow I have and some that I will have tomorrow! ^_^

    And thanks, I'm glad you found the first chapter intriguing. And yeah, I cheat sometimes too. Although sometimes I wish we didn't have to put some of the warnings or little spoilers up because then I'd REALLY shock people with some of my ideas! But whatever, they're good for when you're a reader.

    And thanks! I liked writing that part with Snape brewing. I had this huge image of all those stories with wizards in my head when I wrote that and all the things you'd think about when you hear about wizards (not particularly relating to HP world) Although I thought of the light because if LOTR I admit. XD But yeah, I'D sure be even more into potions had I seen Snape brew, because I just KNOW he was amazing at it!

    And thanks! My parents are debating on whether or not they're taking my (my dad's very protective) But I'm glad you liked the chapter and I wish you luck this new semester!!

Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 08 Jan 2010 10:57 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting start. I look forward to seeing where you go with it. Especially with the missing mark on Snape's arm. Hmmmmmmm...

    As for the snow, you can keep it. We're on day 9 of snow here and I have plenty enough of my own. :-D

    Author's Response: Really? Wonder why no one's taking me up on the snow offer *sarcasm* Glad I'm not where you are Cee! You can have a hairdryer then to melt some snow. But thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! XD
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 08 Jan 2010 10:50 pm
Reviewer: Amanda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AHHHHH IT WAS GREAT!!! I am soooo glad you are continuing it! AWESOME!

    Author's Response: lol Thanks! Glad you liked it so far!!

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