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Title: Chapter 4: Sleep in Peace 18 Jan 2010 5:33 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's interesting that Severus seems to recognize something about everyone around him. I wonder if he will ever be returned to his natural age?

    Author's Response: I really don't want to tell you the answer to that because I want you to read on! But thanks for the review silver! :)
Title: Chapter 4: Sleep in Peace 18 Jan 2010 5:32 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! I liked seeing Severus' point of view. It sheds light on a lot of things and his character. I laughed at how Severus thought that Harry was a "bit dense." Great chapter, nicely done. Thank you for a timely update! Please write more when you can. I look forward to reading more about Harry and little Severus. Will anyone figure out Harry's problem? Maybe later Severus will tell someone.

    Author's Response: Ha! I giggled when Severus called Harry "a bit dense" too. I actually forgot about it until I reread it. But thank you. Severus and Harry will get to know each other a bit better next chapter. Thanks so much for reading Jan! :D
Title: Chapter 4: Sleep in Peace 18 Jan 2010 4:51 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Severus. How sad. :(

    I wonder if when he grows up again, if he'll remember how kind Harry was with him. I hope so, and perhaps be kinder to the boy.

    I love how you delved into Severus' character and thoughts.

    Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked this chapter Pandora. ^_^ Thanks again for the review! Any chance you'll be updating soon? :D
Title: Chapter 3: What Are Little Boys Made Of? 16 Jan 2010 10:40 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I adore your use of the poem in this story.

    Your Dumbledore is so in character. In a way, it makes me dislike your Dumbledore because he is so much like he is in the books, and I didn't like how uninvolved he was with Harry. It frustrated me. So I guess that's a compliment for you.

    I really liked how Harry took care of little Severus, and how when Severus tried to run off, he put him back on the bed. I especially liked how Harry explained what happened to Poppy. It was so in character, but more than that, like the character was alive. Nicely done. I am enjoying your Harry a lot.

    Good back story for Severus. It was sad, but also fitting with canon. I liked how Dumbledore explained things to Harry.

    At first, when Dumbledore asked Harry for a favor I worried that it would be to take care of Snape for good, but he didn't and that seemed right. More in character. I have a feeling that Harry will end up with Severus though. I can't wait to see how that will come about, and what their relationship will be. Maybe Severus will find a friend in Harry.

    Ohhh... Severus hasn't met Lily yet in his current age. I bet that Harry becomes his new best friend over time. Maybe that can help help heal him long term and help him get over Lily.

    I wonder if the potion mixed with the spell is what deaged Severus. I bet it was. I hope that nothing will develop, like Severus dying once he grows up to the exact age he was before as an effect of the spell. That would be tragic.

    Well thanks for posting this update and i hope to read more!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! Glad you liked the poem. ^_^

    And yeah, I didn't much like Dumbledore in the book much either, but I wanted to stay more true to that than I did in some of my other stories where I either made him really kinda stupid (in a smart way) or bad. He's just old and a bit cranky at the moment.

    And I'm thrilled you like Harry in this. I'm basing a lot of what he does or says off of things that I might do myself, so if it gets too out of character, please let me know. I mean, I would've done what Harry had if I saw this little kid trying to run away and all while he was hurt.

    Always thought Severus would have a tragic backstory. He just seemed the type to me. And he hasn't met Lily, but he and Harry will be seeing a lot of each other.

    Dumbledore will be asking a lot of Harry in this story I think. He's old and in charge of so many things he's going to have trouble taking care of a little kid too. But he should take care of Sev since it IS his responsibility and all. But you'll find out what happened with the spell and the potion and all later on. I can say that I have NO plans for killing off Snape when he gets back to thirty-five, but that's all I'll say....that is a sad idea, isn't it?

    Well, thanks so much for your kind review and thanks so much for reading!! :D

Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 16 Jan 2010 10:34 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay!!!! This rocks!!! Hehe, I loved the ending. I also really liked the use of the poem. Good choice. It's a good poem and was used brilliantly. I normally don't like poetry in stories, but it was short, long, and a bit of a foreboding. Nicely done.

    I enjoy your Harry immensely. I find him to be very in character, and more like his book version in the earlier books.

    I was all stressed out when Harry took such a long time to explain to the teachers what happened. Archer could have disappeared by the time they got there, but I suppose it all worked out.

    And now I'm thinking that Snape has been turned into a cloak or something. Wouldn't that be interesting?

    This is a wonderful story so far. Thank you for sharing it with us!

    Author's Response:

    HAHA! You're like the second person that thought Severus was the cloak! XD No, he's not the cloak. But I'm glad you liked Harry in this. I liked Harry a lot better when he was younger and a bit more innocent. But yeah, he's still young, and doesn't know exactly what to do all the time. But it did kinda worked in the end, didn't it?

    And YAY! Thanks. I'm glad you liked the poem. I like the creepiness of some of the old childhood poems. (Is that kinda weird?) But yeah, I wanted to have it foreboding and a bit hopeful. Harry DID see the red sky at NIGHT which meant that things were good. Would have been bad had he seen it in the morning.

    But thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying this so far. Thanks for reading! :D

Title: Chapter 3: What Are Little Boys Made Of? 13 Jan 2010 9:33 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I've a feeling Harry and Severus are going to soon begin to grow attached to each other. It's really sad that Dumbledore doesn't seem willing to make time for Severus, who really is his responsibility. Harry will just have to take up his slack, I suppose.

    Author's Response: Harry's going to be helping a lot with Severus, but I think Dumbles will surprise you later on...maybe not. But Severus really does need someone to care for him. Thanks so much for the review!
Title: Chapter 3: What Are Little Boys Made Of? 13 Jan 2010 9:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter I hope they get on but how is Harry going to entertain Severus

    Author's Response: Oh, he'll try his very best to. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 3: What Are Little Boys Made Of? 13 Jan 2010 9:22 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus. I hope Harry can get through to Severus since they were both abused in their youth. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm very glad you're enjoying this so far. And Harry and Severus will talk later on. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 3: What Are Little Boys Made Of? 13 Jan 2010 7:51 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh please update soon! I love this story

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'll update when I can. Thanks for reading!
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 13 Jan 2010 3:36 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish that song was never made up. I used to sing it all the time when I was little and then when I actually learned about it in school, it gave me nightmares. What an awesome first chapter. :)

    Author's Response: I used to think it was about how people got dizzy when they held hands and danced around outside in circles when I was little, but yeah, after that I was kinda like, "Wow." But then I grew to be more interested in the darker tidbits of history....but I'm not gothic or anything! But yeah, thanks! Glad you liked is so far!

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