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Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 11 Jan 2010 4:35 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhhh, now I understand your trying to give away the snow. I'm on the other side of the lake from you. The side that had 18" of Lake Effect snow Friday/Saturday! Somehow I doubt the hairdryer you offered would make much of a difference. LOL

    On to the review - Loved Harry's reaction to Snape's "demise" and being told of the older man's duty. You'd thing Dumbly would have a little more tact so soon after Cedric's death. Then again, maybe not.

    I also liked how Poppy casting a light sleep spell on Harry in spite of the calming draught and the dreamless sleep. After what he'd seen, he would have to have been severely medicated to be able to sleep.

    Good job again.

    Author's Response:

    ...So...you DON'T want my snow OR the hairdryer? Man, you're hard to please! lol Just kidding. I don't like snow, and I'm wondering why on earth I'm going to school up here! But oh well...

    I'm glad you liked Harry's reaction. I was going for the "I may not have liked him, but I still wanted to help and I have a total case of shell shock at the moment" kinda deal. And yeah, Dumbles might not have handled that so well, but then, he was grieving for Severus too. But yes, Poppy was very considerate with Harry. He DID need the sleep, no doubt about it.

    Thanks again for another lovely review!

Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 11 Jan 2010 4:15 am
Reviewer: LaileeJane (Signed) [Report This]
    I may be dense, I have absolutely no idea what you are planning, but I can't wait for more! Fantastic job!

    Author's Response: I don't think you're dense, I just think you're excited I updated! ^_^ But I hope next chapter's a bit of a surprise. I always like those kind of surprises. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 11 Jan 2010 4:13 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    another great chapter! you and you Cliff hangers!LOL Please update soon.

    Author's Response: I'm sorry! I can't help leaving cliff hangers! (I think it's in my blood or something) But I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 2: Red Sky At Night 11 Jan 2010 4:05 am
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm loving this. I think I have an idea what happened to Severus. I guess I'll have to wait for the next update to be sure.

    Author's Response: Thanks! And yeah, I'm sure you've started to figure it all out, but I'm still glad you like it. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 10 Jan 2010 9:27 pm
Reviewer: rosiegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 10 Jan 2010 9:04 pm
Reviewer: Tonks-is-cool (Signed) [Report This]
    You are so amazing, an awesome chapter full of tension.
    A breathtaking start of another brilliant story.
    Very good descriptions.

    It is hard to believe that you are so young and write so well.

    My heart nearly stopped when Harry heard the last curse, the AK.
    Whose voice called AK?
    Who is dead?
    Please, not Snape!
    I am very worried.
    Poor Harry. This was not what he expected when he went down there to complain about his essay.

    And I wonder what happened before to his arm, why was the dark mark bleeding and hurting like that?
    I suppose the Dark Lord send him terrible pain through the dark mark to punish Snape for his treachery, after that Death Eater told him what he witnessed the night before, but then the timing doesn´t really make sense... because only a few minutes after Snape felt the mark start to burn, this Mr. Archer arrived at the potions classroom down in the Hogwarts dungeons.
    As far as I was aware, it takes longer for someone visiting to apparate to the gates and walk all the way up to the castle or alternativly from the wards border in the forbidden forrest, it´s quite a way.
    Well I am sure you will explain everything in this story later on.

    Author's Response: Wow! You reviewed on here too! So, I guess I explained everything for you on the other review you sent me. Thanks a bundle for the review! :D
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 10 Jan 2010 9:46 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh my I hope to see more soon

    Author's Response: Yep, you should see more really soon. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 10 Jan 2010 3:41 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! Awesome start! Is Snape dead? I hope not! i loved how Snape used the Sectumsempra spell he made up. Harry was risking a little with his actions and not running for Dumbledore right away, but it was delightfully in character for a younger Harry. Love it so far. Please continue.

    Author's Response: I always like big beginnings. Makes things a bit interesting I think. But you'll see what's become of Snape later on. And I'm glad you liked my having Snape use his own spell. I think he would have! And I did try to keep Harry ever the Gryffindor in this on. Thanks so much for the lovely review, and I'll be updating very soon! :)
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 09 Jan 2010 8:12 pm
Reviewer: SugarQuills (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm shocked speechless.
    It makes the song sound creepy after attributing it with what just happened.
    Please update soon! I'm really anxious to see what comes next!

    Author's Response: I was going for the shock of it all. But I'm glad you liked it so far! Thanks for the review!! :D
Title: Chapter 1: We All Fall Down 09 Jan 2010 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Lionessmon (Signed) [Report This]
    A snow melting Hairdryer YES PLEASE!!. Brilliant start, keep up the great work but don't leave me on a cliffie for too long. Post soon

    Author's Response: lol Have a hairdryer *holds out hairdryer proudly* And thanks! Glad you liked the chappie so far...even with the cliffie....Thanks again!! :D

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