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Reviews For Of Trolls and Wizard kids
Author's Response: Snape loved Lily, so I guess he can indulge himself in the privacy of his room and talk to her. Thanks a lot for reading my story. LL
“We are talking about a child Pomona, not a plant….” ROFL!!! Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Pomona is an expert in plants, isn't she? But boys and plants need atention and care. I hope you will like the rest of the story. LL
I did notice a spelling error "dotting grandfather already" ought to be doting, although Albus can be dotty sometimes . .. sorry a little joke. Oh and if you have Severus thinking, it might be easier to put his thoughts in italics, makes it easier for a reader to distinguish them and make them stand out. You can do this for any character thinking actually, or even when a character is speaking in another language, like Parseltongue or mind to mind. I do it all the time in my fics. Just a few tips, hope you aren't offended. Author's Response: Thank you very much for you review and for the tips. Some times this things are difficult to catch, I will always appreciate tips and advices. Thank you very much for reading. |
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