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Reviews For Of Trolls and Wizard kids
Author's Response: Hello Poirot: I have a beta reader, but sometimes we go over the mistakes and are not able to find them. I would appreciate it very much if you point what ever you find odd and I will fix it gladdly. Thank you very much for your review. LL
Author's Response: Hello Ankita: I have not written that part yet, I guess that he wioll meet them until the summer vacations. Thank you very much for your review. LL
Author's Response: Hello: He keeps a collection of dirty cauldrons.Or at least that is what he wants the rest of the people to think. Thank you for your review. Please keep on reading. LL
I wish you'd put a little more detail in things, though - what does Harry feel about the flobberworms? Did it hurt when his nose hit the ground? howdo the characters say whatever they say? That sorta thing. I really like the relationship you're building between Snape and Harry, though. It's cute how Harry's starting to figure out that Snape's taking care of him. Author's Response: Hello RhiannanT: Thank you very much for your review. I will try to get a little more inside their heads. Some times it is easy, but some times they turn to be a little difficult or I they are not really sure of what they say. I hope you keep on liking the story. LL
I am really enjoying the tale you are sharing with us. I like the way that you are keeping Snape stern but not unreasonable. I especially enjoyed the scenes in the teacher's lounge. Oh yeah, and Snape teasing Filius for being so blood-thirsty. Nicely done indeed. Author's Response: Hello Cee Cee Mee: Thank you for your review. I am glad you like the story. I took the idea of the teachers lounge out of a Kipling's Stalky and co. He mentions the relationship between the different Head of Houses and teachers in a boarding school and the stories are very funny. So I liked the idea of Hogwarts teachers getting together to talk and enjoy adult company and conversation. Please keep on reading. LL
Author's Response: Hello Keats: Thank you veru much for reading my story and reviewing. I hope you like the next chapters. LL |
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