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Title: Chapter 7 14 Jan 2010 4:46 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I am enjoying this story immensely. The spirit of it is wonderful, but perhaps you need a beta reader to help with the grammar a little

    Author's Response:

    Hello Poirot:

    I have a beta reader, but sometimes we go over the mistakes and are not able to find them. I would appreciate it very much if you point what ever you find odd and I will fix it gladdly.

    Thank you very much for your review.

    LL

Title: Chapter 7 14 Jan 2010 2:34 pm
Reviewer: ankita (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey liked the story...the plot seems well developed..though i'd really like to see snape meeting the dursleys...anywayz good work!!

    Author's Response:

    Hello Ankita:

    I have not written that part yet, I guess that he wioll meet them until the summer vacations.

    Thank you very much for your review.

    LL

Title: Chapter 7 14 Jan 2010 2:21 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh goog old snape and the snasty cauldrons

    Author's Response:

    Hello:

    He keeps a collection of dirty cauldrons.Or at least that is what he wants the rest of the people to think.

    Thank you for your review. Please keep on reading.

    LL

     

Title: Chapter 7 14 Jan 2010 6:43 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwww! I like the detention. Cute!!

    I wish you'd put a little more detail in things, though - what does Harry feel about the flobberworms? Did it hurt when his nose hit the ground? howdo the characters say whatever they say? That sorta thing. I really like the relationship you're building between Snape and Harry, though. It's cute how Harry's starting to figure out that Snape's taking care of him.

    Author's Response:

    Hello RhiannanT:

    Thank you very much for your review. I will try to get a little more inside their heads. Some times it is easy, but some times they turn to be a little difficult or I they are not really sure of what they say. I hope you keep on liking the story. LL

Title: Chapter 7 14 Jan 2010 6:11 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    I know that I should have been commenting all along, but I was too eager to click on the "Next" button and see what was in the next chapter.

    I am really enjoying the tale you are sharing with us. I like the way that you are keeping Snape stern but not unreasonable. I especially enjoyed the scenes in the teacher's lounge.

    Oh yeah, and Snape teasing Filius for being so blood-thirsty. Nicely done indeed.

    Author's Response:

    Hello  Cee Cee Mee:

    Thank you for your review. I am glad you like the story. I took the idea of the teachers lounge out of a Kipling's Stalky and co. He mentions the relationship between the different Head of Houses and teachers in a boarding school and the stories are very funny. So I liked the idea of Hogwarts teachers getting together to talk and enjoy adult company and conversation. 

    Please keep on reading.

    LL

     

Title: Chapter 7 14 Jan 2010 1:06 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this story. Good job

    Author's Response:

    Hello Keats:

    Thank you veru much for reading my story and reviewing. I hope you like the next chapters.

    LL


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