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Reviews For Of Trolls and Wizard kids
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading my story. LL
Author's Response: Hello Poirot: I have a beta reader, but sometimes we go over the mistakes and are not able to find them. I would appreciate it very much if you point what ever you find odd and I will fix it gladdly. Thank you very much for your review. LL
Author's Response: Hello Ankita: I have not written that part yet, I guess that he wioll meet them until the summer vacations. Thank you very much for your review. LL
Author's Response: Hello: He keeps a collection of dirty cauldrons.Or at least that is what he wants the rest of the people to think. Thank you for your review. Please keep on reading. LL
I wish you'd put a little more detail in things, though - what does Harry feel about the flobberworms? Did it hurt when his nose hit the ground? howdo the characters say whatever they say? That sorta thing. I really like the relationship you're building between Snape and Harry, though. It's cute how Harry's starting to figure out that Snape's taking care of him. Author's Response: Hello RhiannanT: Thank you very much for your review. I will try to get a little more inside their heads. Some times it is easy, but some times they turn to be a little difficult or I they are not really sure of what they say. I hope you keep on liking the story. LL
I am really enjoying the tale you are sharing with us. I like the way that you are keeping Snape stern but not unreasonable. I especially enjoyed the scenes in the teacher's lounge. Oh yeah, and Snape teasing Filius for being so blood-thirsty. Nicely done indeed. Author's Response: Hello Cee Cee Mee: Thank you for your review. I am glad you like the story. I took the idea of the teachers lounge out of a Kipling's Stalky and co. He mentions the relationship between the different Head of Houses and teachers in a boarding school and the stories are very funny. So I liked the idea of Hogwarts teachers getting together to talk and enjoy adult company and conversation. Please keep on reading. LL
Author's Response: Hello Keats: Thank you veru much for reading my story and reviewing. I hope you like the next chapters. LL
Author's Response: Hello Fmh: I think that Severus does not really know how to be gooey. He believes that he has been frozen for so long. But Harry is going to be able to get into the cracks and make him, if not gooey to care for him. Thank you very much for your review. Please keep on reading. LL
Author's Response: Hello RhiannanT. I like Filius very much, he is funny to write and he is a good friend of Severus, and has a good sense of humor. Thank you very much for your review. Please keep on reading. LL
Author's Response: Hello: Snape wanted to kill them, but he listened to their explanation first. He likes that Harry and Draco are getting along. Thank you a lot for your review.Please keep on reading. LL |
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