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Reviews For Of Trolls and Wizard kids
Author's Response: Hello: Thank you very much for your review. I will update soon. LL
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. We have gone over the charpters several times and thought that we had cought all the mistakes. I would appreciate it very much if you were to point them to me, so I would be able to adress them. Thank you for reading. LL
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, there is a new chapter now. LL
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. I realized that Harry had not bought any clothes for the cold and I wanted Snape to get him clothes. I hope you will keep on reading. Thanks again. LL
“We are talking about a child Pomona, not a plant….” ROFL!!! Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Pomona is an expert in plants, isn't she? But boys and plants need atention and care. I hope you will like the rest of the story. LL
I did notice a spelling error "dotting grandfather already" ought to be doting, although Albus can be dotty sometimes . .. sorry a little joke. Oh and if you have Severus thinking, it might be easier to put his thoughts in italics, makes it easier for a reader to distinguish them and make them stand out. You can do this for any character thinking actually, or even when a character is speaking in another language, like Parseltongue or mind to mind. I do it all the time in my fics. Just a few tips, hope you aren't offended. Author's Response: Thank you very much for you review and for the tips. Some times this things are difficult to catch, I will always appreciate tips and advices. Thank you very much for reading.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, I've fixed the chapters. I hope you will enjoy them. Thanks again. |
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