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Title: Poison 08 Feb 2010 2:48 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A nice story, though I personally think that a teacher who poisons a student with a substance that causes severe pain, should be sacked immediately! And to have said student depend in his recovery on a potion he himself has to make and that well knowing that the student isn't the most competent brewer to begin with - he should be dragged in front of the school counsel and get a lawsuit! Just a little scolding from the medi-witch isn't enough! But thus are the rules in the wizarding world. Teachers get away with almost everything!
    But I'm sure, "your" Severus at least found a bit of his conscience somewhere... To expect Harry to tell him how he felt after all the drap he's put him through over the years, that'S just absurd! Harry had to assume that Snape wanted to make him suffer for a ling time, that's after all what his only real experiences with the Potions Master have been like, even though it mostly was emotional/verbal abuse. Maybe this taught Snape a valuable lesson and he'll rethink his own behaviour... Nicely done!
Title: Poison 28 Jan 2010 3:30 am
Reviewer: MistressSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I really like this. It's lovely :)
Title: Poison 27 Jan 2010 6:17 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely as Severus is in character
Title: Poison 25 Jan 2010 9:49 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is wonderful...but it needs to be longer! Yes, we need a whole novel here and this just be the first chapter.

    I'd love to see more of when Harry wakes and Severus is there. And was adding the belladonna truly just a mistake on Harry's part? Especially as he was being very careful? I just had to wonder.
Title: Poison 25 Jan 2010 9:49 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is wonderful...but it needs to be longer! Yes, we need a whole novel here and this just be the first chapter.

    I'd love to see more of when Harry wakes and Severus is there. And was adding the belladonna truly just a mistake on Harry's part? Especially as he was being very careful? I just had to wonder.

    Author's Response:

    In the longer version of this, which was blooming in my mind but didn't make the final cut on paper, Harry intentionally had the belladonna in his potion, to counteract another substance--Severus never actually looked at the entire ingredients list, so he thinks Harry's a moron. I may extend it to show the aftermath of the accident, because there were a few bits and pieces that would show that Harry wasn't actually a moron, he just took a more complicated route to his antidote, and face it, Harry's not really one to always go with the most direct and concise path. :) I am contemplating doing a companion piece for this or perhaps a longer chaptered fic...I was toying with a response to one of the challenges I was interested in trying, and I think it would work perfectly here.

     

    Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Title: Poison 25 Jan 2010 6:57 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I know the story is complete but for some reason it seems unfinished. Otherwise its a nice one shot.

    Author's Response: I know...it was meant to be a snapshot in a series of events, not an actual story with a purpose, which is the only explanation I can give for the unfinishedness (I make up my own words, lol) of it. Thanks.
Title: Poison 24 Jan 2010 9:31 pm
Reviewer: Sheila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Like it. Really well written. And - oh, pleeeeaaaaze - do a sequel to this chapter. I would bet that Malfoy put the Belladonna in the potion because he knew that Snape would make him test class's potions.

    Author's Response: Thank you!!
Title: Poison 24 Jan 2010 2:08 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Will there be sequil I hope so I would love to see what you woud do with it...

    Author's Response: Thank you! I am considering a follow-up piece :)
Title: Poison 24 Jan 2010 1:26 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    What a nice ficlet! You reminded me I have not reread canon for ages. One thing puzzled me - why Harry apologised to Severus when he woke up? Mila

    Author's Response: He's disoriented from the botched potion, he's not meant to be very lucid. :) Thanks!
Title: Poison 24 Jan 2010 2:37 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    This should be longer.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'll take that into consideration. :)

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