| Title: Chapter 1 - The Problem
| 26 Jan 2010 2:26 am
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| Reviewer: mercurywrites_arm (Anonymous)
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This sounds like it's going to be really funny! Keep it up! I can't wait to read the rest!
good start!
I think you get a good picture of snape as he is in the films!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is what I was trying to do. I'm very glad you thnk I succeeded. I hope I keep his character believable through the remaining two chapters.
| Title: Chapter 1 - The Problem
| 25 Jan 2010 8:15 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Great beginning, and what a way to end the chapter, snape popping in. BTW, who go who knocked up, who was lavender talking bout. Can't wait for next post.
Author's Response: Thank you! The girl that Lavender was gossiping about was an unnamed Hufflepuff, if you really want to know. Nothing against Hufflepuffs, it's just that I rolled a four-sided die when I read your question and the number I assigned to Hufflepuff showed up. I'll try to have the next post up as soon as possible.
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