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Reviews For The Final Breeze 2
Title: Chapter 2 – Awaken 06 Apr 2016 8:13 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear me. 12 and 13 again? The first time around was hard enough. Glad they have Poppy and Alastor to care for them. They seem like stern yet loving parents.

    --his
Title: Chapter 2 – Awaken 05 Mar 2010 2:45 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww. Severus and Harry are so sweet. I thought you wrote the experience of the 12/13 yr old feelings and perspectives as felt by someone older really well. Or at least, I can't tell (obvs ;) but in a very interesting and thoughtful way.

    Author's Response:

    I'm very glad you like it. It's my favorite story at the moment!

     Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 2 – Awaken 16 Feb 2010 8:09 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really torn in how I feel. I have a feeling that it would have been so much easier on both Harry and Severus if they didn't have clear memories of being much older. In any case, while I know that they might at this time want to be returned to their original ages, I think that it would be better for them to have a redo of their teen years instead. This time they won't have to worry about abuse, neglect, or in Harry's case a crazed megalomaniac who wants him dead. I hope that they will be able to accept what is to come.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 2 – Awaken 16 Feb 2010 7:39 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter, and love where the story is going. Can't wait to read about sev and harry growing up together with poppy and alastor. Fantastic!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 2 – Awaken 16 Feb 2010 1:44 am
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    excellent chapter quite angsty, look forward to the next chapters.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

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