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Title: Chapter 3 – I Won't Go to School! 14 Dec 2016 4:11 pm
Reviewer: Ashley_Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    I think they are too immature and simple for 12 and 13-year-olds. A 10-year-old's mind is even more complicated than theirs. Perhaps they'd be more rageous but they should be able to hide their feelings and thoughts better. I'm not far away from 12 and 13-year-old. I know what it's like. They still wear masks in front of people and their minds are more complicated than you think. Also I don't think how one thinks depends on his or her body's age. It depends on the memories and experiences. With everything Severus and Harry'd been through, I imagine they would be like 16 and 35-year-olds stucked in small bodies. It's the experiences which build up who they are and how mature they are, not their ages. Younger ones seem to be less mature because they mostly haven't been through as much as the older ones. Severus and Harry here just feel wrong. Well, these are just my opinion. Overall it's a good story and I like the idea of them getting what they deserve at last, a proper childhood/teenage-hood. :)
Title: Chapter 3 – I Won't Go to School! 06 Apr 2016 8:58 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    It's amazing how emotional pre-teens are. Goodness. Everything is a crises and and NEVER is used way too much in their vocabulary! lol. "but I NEVER get to do this...." when they just did it the other day. lol

    Harry and Severus in the same year will be great I'm sure, but he is so much younger than Ron and Hermione now.

    --his
Title: Chapter 3 – I Won't Go to School! 10 Mar 2010 8:46 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So glad you posted again, I loved the first story and really like the fact that harry and sev are kids again, they both deserve it. Please post soon! Great chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 – I Won't Go to School! 10 Mar 2010 7:16 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus! I really can't blame him for his fears. His first time going to Hogwarts was a bad experience and there will be students who will take advantage of his new vulnerability. It might actually be better if they were resorted....

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I understand your wish for a resorting but I need Severus to stay in Slytherin for the pot. He shall make different friends than Harry. But maybe I will change my mind and let him resort in Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff. We will see.  Maybe you have convinced me.

    Thank you very much for your review!  

Title: Chapter 3 – I Won't Go to School! 10 Mar 2010 5:36 am
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. The explanations of why the boys need to go to school again and repeat their years makes sense. Severus' highly emotional state must be rather disconcerting for him, but it is just right for a thirteen year old boy. I am really looking forward to seeing what school is like and what both Harry and Severus will have to face in the midst of the regular population of the students.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 – I Won't Go to School! 10 Mar 2010 5:19 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! Horray for an update!!! Too bad that Snape and Harry have to go back to school, but I am so glad that they will be in the same year at least. Maybe they will do an aptitude test so see how the boy's magic is.

    Great story idea. I can't wait to watch this story unfold and develop. Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 – I Won't Go to School! 10 Mar 2010 4:11 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I can't wait for more. I love the moments between Severus and Alastor.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

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