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Title: Chapter 5 - The Ministry Interferes 12 Apr 2016 10:25 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    I despise people who use kids to further their own selfish ends. Whether well intentioned or not the one who ends up hurt, mentally and/or physically are the kids. Yay for Alastor holding his ground even when he wanted to go to his wife so badly. Poor Severus sobbing his little heart out. Brings tears to my own eyes.

    --his
Title: Chapter 5 - The Ministry Interferes 03 Apr 2010 5:58 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus and Harry. :(

    I was really looking forward to this chapter and it far surpassed my expectations. I felt so bad for Severus and Harry.

    I loved overprotective Alastor.

    Please update as soon as you can!

    I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter of Cherokee Camp as well. Please don't forget to post a sneek peek!

    Author's Response:

    I haven't heard from my Cherokee Camp beta. Last time I heard was that she was ill but getting better. So I have no clue when I can update it. The Sneak Preveiws are all up on my homepage.

    Thank you very much for your review!  

Title: Chapter 5 - The Ministry Interferes 03 Apr 2010 12:47 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    The people at the Youth Welfare Office are quite obviously idiots. Of course, Harry and Severus would be frightened of strangers coming into their home to examine them and perhaps take them away. One thing is for sure, the one healer was an inappropriate choice. He seemed to be relishing the idea of getting his hands on Severus. I'm really glad that Kingsley showed up to save the day. I've a feeling that things might have gotten bloody otherwise.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 5 - The Ministry Interferes 03 Apr 2010 12:26 am
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    oh I love this story so please update again really soon. I want to see more of Severus and Harry.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

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