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Reviews For The Final Breeze 2
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Great chapter! Author's Response: You will see about the sorting in a few chapters. Thank you very much for your review!
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Little Severus still seems like he has a lot of obstacles and issues to get over. I am glad that he has people around him to help support him. He sounds like he should be on medication. I remember in earlier chapters the healers talking about that... maybe. With Harry around, maybe Harry will be the one who helps protect Severus and make him feel better. But since Harry has such good friends, will that make him forget about Severus? Will his friends accept Severus? Will Severus find an occasion to protect Harry? Even in his smaller form? I have a feeling that Severus will act to protect Harry when he might not act to protect himself. I noted that you wrote that someone was reminded "on" of something. Usually it is written as someone was reminded "of" something. I thought that you might want to know. :) Author's Response: I will check the text for the mistake. Thanks for telling me! Thank you very much for your review! |
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