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Title: Chapter 11 – New Friendships 12 Apr 2016 11:16 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Very glad Hermione and Ron are going to remain friends with Harry and that Severus will get to keep his friends as well. It'll be different, but hopefully they will all be able to adjust to the changes.

    --his
Title: Chapter 11 – New Friendships 06 May 2010 4:02 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving this so far, im glad that Severus stayed older than Harry even if it is just a few months hehe, looking forward to more :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 11 – New Friendships 05 May 2010 9:52 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus, of course, has the worst of the issues; he was deaged a great many more years and will have far more memories to lose or recategorize. Harry is lucky in some ways; his friends are still fairly close in age to him and will help to keep him protected. Severus, on the other hand, wasn't well liked by the students because of his harsh teaching style and could be retaliated against by some of the more viscious children. It might be best for Severus to end up in Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff, but I hope that he will be in Gryffindor.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: You will see about the sorting in a few chapters.  Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 11 – New Friendships 05 May 2010 2:23 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Sev...you really do enjoy torturing him don't you? LOL. Its okay I enjoy reading stories where he gets tortured. Excellent chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 11 – New Friendships 05 May 2010 12:46 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Loooved it! :D

    Little Severus still seems like he has a lot of obstacles and issues to get over. I am glad that he has people around him to help support him. He sounds like he should be on medication. I remember in earlier chapters the healers talking about that... maybe. With Harry around, maybe Harry will be the one who helps protect Severus and make him feel better. But since Harry has such good friends, will that make him forget about Severus? Will his friends accept Severus?

    Will Severus find an occasion to protect Harry? Even in his smaller form? I have a feeling that Severus will act to protect Harry when he might not act to protect himself.

    I noted that you wrote that someone was reminded "on" of something. Usually it is written as someone was reminded "of" something. I thought that you might want to know. :)

    Author's Response:

    I will check the text for the mistake. Thanks for telling me!

    Thank you very much for your review! 


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