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Title: Chapter 13 – The Sorting 19 Apr 2016 10:58 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, Ravenclaw. Alicia seems nice. Hope she becomes a friend. Severus could use one.

    Moody will keep Severus in the Great Hall until he finishes his food. Even if he was late for class!

    --his
Title: Chapter 13 – The Sorting 27 Dec 2010 9:29 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    cute i so called it Ravenclaw love the sceduale it will be interesting and love his housemates i think it will help

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 13 – The Sorting 04 Jun 2010 12:29 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I know that they just want Severus to get better, but I'm not sure that having other students help to police his eating is a good idea. It might only make him become even more reluctant when it comes to eating. While I'm glad that Severus is finding some possible friends in Ravenclaw, I find myself wondering if it might have been better for him to be in Gryffindor.

    Author's Response:

    Believe me Gryffindor wouldn't be a good choice. I placed both in a different house because I want them to have different friends as well. So they won't depend on each other totally. You will learn more about the Gryffindors in the next chapters.

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 13 – The Sorting 03 Jun 2010 8:31 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like him in Ravenclaw, good decision. It's going to be interesting to see him with Luna.

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Title: Chapter 13 – The Sorting 03 Jun 2010 3:55 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Severus' new house, and his new housemates. Good job and good choice! :) Thank for the update! I enjoyed reading it. I am worried about Severus and his eating.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

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