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Title: Chapter 14 – First Day in Classes 20 Apr 2016 10:37 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Man, Severus had a ROUGH first day! Thank you Minerva for the rescue. lol.

    I just want to hug Harry and pinch Severus for being so mean. Whew. Poor Harry, my heart aches for that child.

    --his
Title: Chapter 14 – First Day in Classes 16 Jun 2010 1:28 am
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    excellent so far please update soon thanks :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! 
Title: Chapter 14 – First Day in Classes 12 Jun 2010 10:49 pm
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am glad Sev is doing well in Ravenclaw, but I don't like the way he treated Harry, and I don't think Poppy will either. Please post soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! 
Title: Chapter 14 – First Day in Classes 10 Jun 2010 8:39 am
Reviewer: ranDum InSanity (Signed) [Report This]
    Best birthday present ever!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Happy Birthday!

    Thank you very much for your review! 

Title: Chapter 14 – First Day in Classes 10 Jun 2010 4:30 am
Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AWESOME CHAPTER!!! Evil cliffe though. I can't wait for more, i'm curious to see how Sev reacts to how Harry's feeling. Please update soon!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 14 – First Day in Classes 10 Jun 2010 2:52 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I can understand Severus' worries. It is quite embarrassing to a boy his age to be given special attention by teachers, particularly when it isn't reward based. At least Minerva was thoughtful enough to pull him out of the classroom to speak to him. Then for him to have to endure taunting from other students made it all seem that much worse. It also doesn't help that he is being harassed by his parents when it comes to eating as well. He just never gets a break. It's really too bad that he snapped at Harry because of his frustration, though.

    Poor Harry! What Severus said isn't the real problem here. Goyle and Leroy are the ones that said that Severus didn't want anything to do with him, not Severus. Harry already had the fear and they just happened to say just the right things to upset him. One question I have is this, why isn't there anyone watching out for Harry and keeping bullies away from him like with Severus? Why was he alone in that hallway?

    I think it might have been better if Harry had been re-sorted too, or better yet, they could have both been sent to a different school altogether. It will be impossible for them to truly have a new start in Hogwarts.

    Author's Response:

    Why was Harry alone? He doesn't like his classmates and tried to avoid them. His older friends still see him as a friend and when he told them that he wanted to be alone, they left him alone. Severus's Ravenclaws instead see him as their responsibility and therefore followed him. I hope that answers your questions.

    Thank you very much for your review!


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