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Title: Chapter 14 – First Day in Classes 10 Jun 2010 8:39 am
Reviewer: ranDum InSanity (Signed) [Report This]
    Best birthday present ever!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Happy Birthday!

    Thank you very much for your review! 

Title: Chapter 14 – First Day in Classes 10 Jun 2010 4:30 am
Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AWESOME CHAPTER!!! Evil cliffe though. I can't wait for more, i'm curious to see how Sev reacts to how Harry's feeling. Please update soon!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 14 – First Day in Classes 10 Jun 2010 2:52 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I can understand Severus' worries. It is quite embarrassing to a boy his age to be given special attention by teachers, particularly when it isn't reward based. At least Minerva was thoughtful enough to pull him out of the classroom to speak to him. Then for him to have to endure taunting from other students made it all seem that much worse. It also doesn't help that he is being harassed by his parents when it comes to eating as well. He just never gets a break. It's really too bad that he snapped at Harry because of his frustration, though.

    Poor Harry! What Severus said isn't the real problem here. Goyle and Leroy are the ones that said that Severus didn't want anything to do with him, not Severus. Harry already had the fear and they just happened to say just the right things to upset him. One question I have is this, why isn't there anyone watching out for Harry and keeping bullies away from him like with Severus? Why was he alone in that hallway?

    I think it might have been better if Harry had been re-sorted too, or better yet, they could have both been sent to a different school altogether. It will be impossible for them to truly have a new start in Hogwarts.

    Author's Response:

    Why was Harry alone? He doesn't like his classmates and tried to avoid them. His older friends still see him as a friend and when he told them that he wanted to be alone, they left him alone. Severus's Ravenclaws instead see him as their responsibility and therefore followed him. I hope that answers your questions.

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 13 – The Sorting 04 Jun 2010 12:29 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I know that they just want Severus to get better, but I'm not sure that having other students help to police his eating is a good idea. It might only make him become even more reluctant when it comes to eating. While I'm glad that Severus is finding some possible friends in Ravenclaw, I find myself wondering if it might have been better for him to be in Gryffindor.

    Author's Response:

    Believe me Gryffindor wouldn't be a good choice. I placed both in a different house because I want them to have different friends as well. So they won't depend on each other totally. You will learn more about the Gryffindors in the next chapters.

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 13 – The Sorting 03 Jun 2010 8:31 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like him in Ravenclaw, good decision. It's going to be interesting to see him with Luna.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 13 – The Sorting 03 Jun 2010 3:55 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Severus' new house, and his new housemates. Good job and good choice! :) Thank for the update! I enjoyed reading it. I am worried about Severus and his eating.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 12 – Friends 15 May 2010 7:29 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    Glad to see Sev opening up some.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 12 – Friends 15 May 2010 1:28 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's good to see Severus opening up a little and enjoying himself. I hope that they will be able to get him to the point where they don't have to force him to eat and drink. It might not be a bad idea for the boys to share a room for awhile, so perhaps it is an option that could be looked at?

    Author's Response: Hahaha, I have more chapters finished already and the room thing is already decided, but you will like it! Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 12 – Friends 14 May 2010 11:11 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, very well written please update soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 11 – New Friendships 06 May 2010 4:02 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving this so far, im glad that Severus stayed older than Harry even if it is just a few months hehe, looking forward to more :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

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