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Reviews For The Final Breeze 2
Author's Response: Happy Birthday! Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Poor Harry! What Severus said isn't the real problem here. Goyle and Leroy are the ones that said that Severus didn't want anything to do with him, not Severus. Harry already had the fear and they just happened to say just the right things to upset him. One question I have is this, why isn't there anyone watching out for Harry and keeping bullies away from him like with Severus? Why was he alone in that hallway? I think it might have been better if Harry had been re-sorted too, or better yet, they could have both been sent to a different school altogether. It will be impossible for them to truly have a new start in Hogwarts. Author's Response: Why was Harry alone? He doesn't like his classmates and tried to avoid them. His older friends still see him as a friend and when he told them that he wanted to be alone, they left him alone. Severus's Ravenclaws instead see him as their responsibility and therefore followed him. I hope that answers your questions. Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Believe me Gryffindor wouldn't be a good choice. I placed both in a different house because I want them to have different friends as well. So they won't depend on each other totally. You will learn more about the Gryffindors in the next chapters. Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Hahaha, I have more chapters finished already and the room thing is already decided, but you will like it! Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
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