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Title: Chapter 11 – New Friendships 05 May 2010 9:52 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus, of course, has the worst of the issues; he was deaged a great many more years and will have far more memories to lose or recategorize. Harry is lucky in some ways; his friends are still fairly close in age to him and will help to keep him protected. Severus, on the other hand, wasn't well liked by the students because of his harsh teaching style and could be retaliated against by some of the more viscious children. It might be best for Severus to end up in Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff, but I hope that he will be in Gryffindor.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: You will see about the sorting in a few chapters.  Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 11 – New Friendships 05 May 2010 2:23 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Sev...you really do enjoy torturing him don't you? LOL. Its okay I enjoy reading stories where he gets tortured. Excellent chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 11 – New Friendships 05 May 2010 12:46 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Loooved it! :D

    Little Severus still seems like he has a lot of obstacles and issues to get over. I am glad that he has people around him to help support him. He sounds like he should be on medication. I remember in earlier chapters the healers talking about that... maybe. With Harry around, maybe Harry will be the one who helps protect Severus and make him feel better. But since Harry has such good friends, will that make him forget about Severus? Will his friends accept Severus?

    Will Severus find an occasion to protect Harry? Even in his smaller form? I have a feeling that Severus will act to protect Harry when he might not act to protect himself.

    I noted that you wrote that someone was reminded "on" of something. Usually it is written as someone was reminded "of" something. I thought that you might want to know. :)

    Author's Response:

    I will check the text for the mistake. Thanks for telling me!

    Thank you very much for your review! 

Title: Chapter 10 – Heads of House 30 Apr 2010 9:30 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I do hope that they are careful in how obvious their 'watching' is. I would hate for Harry and Severus' chances of making new friends to be hindered, because of the worries the staff has about them. This is a difficult situation for everyone and it will take time for things to settle into a normal routine. Hopefully, the introduction of the boys post de-aging with the other children will go smoothly. Will it only be Severus that is resorted or both? I wonder which House(s) the boy(s) will end up in?

    Author's Response:

    About how obviously the teachers will watch them you need to read on. ;) I can't give this away without spoiling the fun for you.

    Only Sev will be resorted. Harry will stay in Gryffindor, close to his old friends.

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 10 – Heads of House 29 Apr 2010 11:55 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhh....another cliffy!!!!

    *Sigh* I hate cliffies.

    Anyway excellent chapter and I can't wait to read the next. I adore little Severus.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 9 – The Truth 24 Apr 2010 10:49 pm
Reviewer: Nora (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love your stories. You are an amazing and gifted writer. Please update soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 9 – The Truth 24 Apr 2010 12:35 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's going to be a difficult road for both of them, I think. There are so many things that are unknown at this point and that will increase the fears of both boys. I know that Poppy and Alastor want to protect the boys from everything, but I have a feeling that they should keep them informed about what they might possible face. How will the boys recognize problems, if they don't know what to look for?

    Author's Response:

    But if they now what can happen, they will worry too much about it and then their minds could play tricks and they really get it. Therefore the healer just made them sensible for changes and encouraged them to announce anything unusual as soon as possible.

    Thank you very much for your review!  

Title: Chapter 9 – The Truth 23 Apr 2010 10:56 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, it seems like the boys may have a rough school life in front of them, but it is good that they have a lot of people who care about them.

    I bet that Severus will be amazing at Potions class.

    Great story.

    Just so you know, advice is never advices. It's like fish is always fish. There is no spelling change for the plural form.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for pointing out the mistake. I changed it.

    We will see about POtions and Severus. ;)

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 8 – Harry's Examination 17 Apr 2010 12:21 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhhh....Harry is just too cute! Personally I hope that after a lot of healing and mushy moments...etc. that they are returned to their proper ages.

    I looking forward to family moments between Poppy, Alastor, Sev and Harry!

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Nope there will definitely not be an returning to their 'prope'r age if you mean that they age again by a potion or anything else than normal growing. Their behavior will adjust with their current age. That's all. I hope you will still read the story.

    Thank you very much for your review!  

Title: Chapter 8 – Harry's Examination 16 Apr 2010 10:20 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's going to take quite a while for the boys to get used to their new situation. I hope that all the physical problems caused by this sudden de-aging will go away without anything becoming permanent.

    Harry's feelings are understandable. This younger version of Severus has less burdens than the older did and thus, is easier to get along with. This de-aging will cause the family to become even more closely bonded to each other and that is a good thing.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your detailed review!

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