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Reviews For The Final Breeze 2
Great chapter! Author's Response: You will see about the sorting in a few chapters. Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Little Severus still seems like he has a lot of obstacles and issues to get over. I am glad that he has people around him to help support him. He sounds like he should be on medication. I remember in earlier chapters the healers talking about that... maybe. With Harry around, maybe Harry will be the one who helps protect Severus and make him feel better. But since Harry has such good friends, will that make him forget about Severus? Will his friends accept Severus? Will Severus find an occasion to protect Harry? Even in his smaller form? I have a feeling that Severus will act to protect Harry when he might not act to protect himself. I noted that you wrote that someone was reminded "on" of something. Usually it is written as someone was reminded "of" something. I thought that you might want to know. :) Author's Response: I will check the text for the mistake. Thanks for telling me! Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: About how obviously the teachers will watch them you need to read on. ;) I can't give this away without spoiling the fun for you. Only Sev will be resorted. Harry will stay in Gryffindor, close to his old friends. Thank you very much for your review!
*Sigh* I hate cliffies. Anyway excellent chapter and I can't wait to read the next. I adore little Severus. Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: But if they now what can happen, they will worry too much about it and then their minds could play tricks and they really get it. Therefore the healer just made them sensible for changes and encouraged them to announce anything unusual as soon as possible. Thank you very much for your review!
I bet that Severus will be amazing at Potions class. Great story. Just so you know, advice is never advices. It's like fish is always fish. There is no spelling change for the plural form. Author's Response: Thank you for pointing out the mistake. I changed it. We will see about POtions and Severus. ;) Thank you very much for your review!
I looking forward to family moments between Poppy, Alastor, Sev and Harry! Great chapter! Author's Response: Nope there will definitely not be an returning to their 'prope'r age if you mean that they age again by a potion or anything else than normal growing. Their behavior will adjust with their current age. That's all. I hope you will still read the story. Thank you very much for your review!
Harry's feelings are understandable. This younger version of Severus has less burdens than the older did and thus, is easier to get along with. This de-aging will cause the family to become even more closely bonded to each other and that is a good thing. Author's Response: Thank you very much for your detailed review! |
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