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Title: Chapter 5 - The Ministry Interferes 03 Apr 2010 5:58 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus and Harry. :(

    I was really looking forward to this chapter and it far surpassed my expectations. I felt so bad for Severus and Harry.

    I loved overprotective Alastor.

    Please update as soon as you can!

    I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter of Cherokee Camp as well. Please don't forget to post a sneek peek!

    Author's Response:

    I haven't heard from my Cherokee Camp beta. Last time I heard was that she was ill but getting better. So I have no clue when I can update it. The Sneak Preveiws are all up on my homepage.

    Thank you very much for your review!  

Title: Chapter 5 - The Ministry Interferes 03 Apr 2010 12:47 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    The people at the Youth Welfare Office are quite obviously idiots. Of course, Harry and Severus would be frightened of strangers coming into their home to examine them and perhaps take them away. One thing is for sure, the one healer was an inappropriate choice. He seemed to be relishing the idea of getting his hands on Severus. I'm really glad that Kingsley showed up to save the day. I've a feeling that things might have gotten bloody otherwise.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 5 - The Ministry Interferes 03 Apr 2010 12:26 am
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    oh I love this story so please update again really soon. I want to see more of Severus and Harry.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 4 – Rules 17 Mar 2010 9:02 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lpve this thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 4 – Rules 15 Mar 2010 7:47 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Severus is right; the Ministry would love to get their hands on Harry and Severus and will use any excuse they can find. Harry and Severus will have to try to remain calm during the examinations, though I know that it will be difficult, particularly for Severus. I just hope that everything will be fine.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 4 – Rules 14 Mar 2010 7:05 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 4 – Rules 14 Mar 2010 6:20 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    The scene of Severus and Harry rough housing was cute. I can't wait for the next chapter please update soon. (And Cherrokee Camp as well!)

    Awesome story!

    Author's Response:

    My beta for this story is a bit stressed and so I don't think there will be a quick update. Today I will update Harry and his new family. For Cherokee Camp I also don't have a chapter back from my beta. :( Sorry!

    Thank you for your review!

Title: Chapter 3 – I Won't Go to School! 10 Mar 2010 8:46 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So glad you posted again, I loved the first story and really like the fact that harry and sev are kids again, they both deserve it. Please post soon! Great chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 – I Won't Go to School! 10 Mar 2010 7:16 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus! I really can't blame him for his fears. His first time going to Hogwarts was a bad experience and there will be students who will take advantage of his new vulnerability. It might actually be better if they were resorted....

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I understand your wish for a resorting but I need Severus to stay in Slytherin for the pot. He shall make different friends than Harry. But maybe I will change my mind and let him resort in Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff. We will see.  Maybe you have convinced me.

    Thank you very much for your review!  

Title: Chapter 3 – I Won't Go to School! 10 Mar 2010 5:36 am
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. The explanations of why the boys need to go to school again and repeat their years makes sense. Severus' highly emotional state must be rather disconcerting for him, but it is just right for a thirteen year old boy. I am really looking forward to seeing what school is like and what both Harry and Severus will have to face in the midst of the regular population of the students.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

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