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Reviews For The Final Breeze 2
Title: Chapter 3 – I Won't Go to School! 10 Mar 2010 5:19 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! Horray for an update!!! Too bad that Snape and Harry have to go back to school, but I am so glad that they will be in the same year at least. Maybe they will do an aptitude test so see how the boy's magic is.

    Great story idea. I can't wait to watch this story unfold and develop. Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 – I Won't Go to School! 10 Mar 2010 4:11 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I can't wait for more. I love the moments between Severus and Alastor.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 2 – Awaken 05 Mar 2010 2:45 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww. Severus and Harry are so sweet. I thought you wrote the experience of the 12/13 yr old feelings and perspectives as felt by someone older really well. Or at least, I can't tell (obvs ;) but in a very interesting and thoughtful way.

    Author's Response:

    I'm very glad you like it. It's my favorite story at the moment!

     Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 2 – Awaken 16 Feb 2010 8:09 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really torn in how I feel. I have a feeling that it would have been so much easier on both Harry and Severus if they didn't have clear memories of being much older. In any case, while I know that they might at this time want to be returned to their original ages, I think that it would be better for them to have a redo of their teen years instead. This time they won't have to worry about abuse, neglect, or in Harry's case a crazed megalomaniac who wants him dead. I hope that they will be able to accept what is to come.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 2 – Awaken 16 Feb 2010 7:39 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter, and love where the story is going. Can't wait to read about sev and harry growing up together with poppy and alastor. Fantastic!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 2 – Awaken 16 Feb 2010 1:44 am
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    excellent chapter quite angsty, look forward to the next chapters.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 1 – Depressions 14 Feb 2010 6:30 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting opening chapter i look forward to the rest of the chapters. Please please update soon thanks

    Author's Response: The next chapter is up now! Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 1 – Depressions 07 Feb 2010 9:01 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad the family is back. Great chapter. Thx for the update on Family and Camp, great stories.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 1 – Depressions 07 Feb 2010 3:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! I can't wait to see if they remember everything or not. Fantastic start and I am so glad that you decided to start a sequel!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 1 – Depressions 06 Feb 2010 8:59 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This might be for the best. I'm not sure which would be best, them remembering or not. I can see positives and negatives in both situations. It might be easier for Poppy and Alastor if they remember, but would it be best for Severus and Harry? I don't know, so I guess I will just have to wait and see.

    Great start on this sequel!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

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