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Title: Prologue: Battle of Hogwarts 01 Mar 2010 10:35 pm
Reviewer: Ash (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting, quite novel and I love snarky Merlin. Quite refreshing when one thinks of how others wrote him, as some perfect being so this is great. Love the fact he's also interested in science too and how it's all incorporated. It doesn't often work well in fics as people tend to go overboard but so far, this is a very nice balance!

    Oh, btw, 172 for a guy who is nineteen - very, very, very short over here in Europe. 177 is short, never mind 172. I know the guy who plays HP in the movies is impossibly short but I never got the idea from JKR that HP was so short too. Not as tall yes, but not this drastic.

    Anyway, great start!

    Author's Response:

    hello!

    haha...I'm asian xD

    most of the guys at my school barely top 5'7", so I thought 172 was pretty decent. I also thought it'd be unrealistic for Harry to suddenly shoot up more than 5 inches (I think), because it seems really, really painful. I know when I had sudden growth spurts I had a fever along with it. Or maybe I'm just strange? 

    thanks for the review!

    ~shige 

Title: Chapter 4: Friendly Fire 28 Feb 2010 12:39 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    A most excellent chapter! I'm really enjoying what you're doing with this story.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm enjoying writing it too! 

    ...I actually thought the next chapter would be really interesting, but it seems to be dragging. whoops? xD

    ~shige 

Title: Chapter 4: Friendly Fire 24 Feb 2010 8:21 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I actually would like Narcissa and Snape to get together, Alex... need to think about that!

    Author's Response:

    hey!

     me too (:

    but I'll have to see what people want first. I've placed the poll on my profile page on ff.net.

    thanks for reviewing!

    ~shige 

Title: Chapter 4: Friendly Fire 23 Feb 2010 5:28 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really glad that Alex was able to rid Severus of the Dark Mark and to give him a way to protect himself against the Ministry's Veritaserum. I have a feeling that they are going to be excellent allies.

    I wonder how Lucius will react when he discovers that his accounts (and those of his 'friends') are frozen and he can't use his money to rescue himself? I know he won't be happy! :D I do hope that Alex's meddling will help Narcissa to escape him and to protect Draco.

    As to your question....I'm not sure. Rosemerta is a choice, but I'm not sure she is the right one. While it would be nice for Matt and Draco to grow up together, I'm not sure that a relationship between Narcissa and Alex is a good idea. I wish I knew more about the classmates of Severus...I will think on it.

    Author's Response:

    Hello!

    I think, in essence, that's the beauty of being a writer. you can manipulate the situation any way you want...but yeah, I don't really know if Narcissa or Rosmerta's a good choice. Like I said in Chapter 3 (or at least I think I did), I think I might write an OC in. But...several people have told me they don't like OC's...but we'll just have to see. There are a couple of names that I've noticed in Marauder fics that keep popping up, so maybe I'll take a look at those.

    Malfoy's going to flip...and so is the rest of the wizarding world! I'm going to have so much fun writing the next chapter =)

    thanks for reviewing!

    ~shige

Title: Chapter 3: Introductions 17 Feb 2010 10:33 pm
Reviewer: Jessie23 (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed the fic so far. Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    hey, 

    thanks! (:

    ~shige 

Title: Chapter 3: Introductions 17 Feb 2010 10:44 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's probably for the best that little Harry be protected by another name and face. He will be afforded a much more normal life, which will be good for him. I'm sure that Alex will be sure that he is very happy.

    I think that Alex is going to do well at Hogwarts. It's pretty obvious that he is already getting on with the other teachers quite well. The only person I could see him having a problem with is Albus Dumbledore.

    I wonder what exactly Albus is talking to Minerva and Flitwick about?

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I've started writing that part...hopefully I didn't build it up that much. Don't worry, it's important...I just don't know if it's that important. 

    I think Alex is loveable no matter what shape/form/name he has.

    I can't wait for the Snape scene! heh. Yeah, I haven't written it yet...xD

    Thanks for reviewing!

    ~shige 

Title: Chapter 2: Meddling with Fate 16 Feb 2010 7:31 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am so glad harry is not with the dursleys. Grattack, author? Please post soon!
Title: Chapter 2: Meddling with Fate 16 Feb 2010 7:24 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's too bad that Alex wasn't able to prevent the deaths of his parents and to prevent the Longbottoms and Sirius from being unable to take little Harry in. I am glad that all the background work that he and Merlin did enabled him to gain custody of his young 'cousin'. I wonder how Dumbledore will take the news that Alex will be raising Harry instead of the Dursleys?

    Great chapter!
Title: Chapter 1: Eureka! 15 Feb 2010 9:18 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Can't wait to read the next chapter, really like where this story is going! Please post soon.
Title: Chapter 1: Eureka! 15 Feb 2010 1:41 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder what changes Harry...er Alex will cause? Will they be for the good or the bad? I do hope that his suggestion to Lily helped to protect at least one of those hurt by the events of Oct. 31, 1981.

    Great chapter! I can't wait to find out what will happen next!

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