I know this will never be finished but I just had to come back for a reread.
| Title: A Royal Mess
| 12 Oct 2020 7:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for the story so far, I hope this can be completed sometime as it is excellent
Wait...peach, as in, Princess Peach from Mario Bros? I was a tad confused...
Love this story, even if I am confused about the whole alternate dimension that suddenly appeared...I want to see just what Ambervale and Pamela do to Snape.
This is interesting. I'm a little confused on how Peach and the others fit in but I look forward to seeing how it all turns out. I like Ambervale and Pamela.
Wow!
That's all I can think of to say, quite honestly. I should have been writing reports this evening, but I just couldn't tear myself away - not even to comment, for which I apologise..
I can't wait for the next installment.
OMG, I know who Peach is. ROFL I love the Chain Chomp, btw, I thought the were adorable in the game.
Great job Wands! You rock! :-D Really liked this: ""Your accccent isss terrible, by the way." hehehe that made me giggle.
Yeah! An update--even if the "dream woman" sequence did feel a bit psychedelic at times. I think I like Peach--is she related to Pamela?
Let me guess--those that chased Harry until he fell into Peach's world were either from Slytherin or were in cohoots with the little snakes. . .
Ambervale is going to cook someone right along with Pamela!
Loved it!
V.
Oh, I do so love this story and wish you'd update more often... please?
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