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Reviews For Moon Fire
Title: Midnight Confrontation 28 Sep 2014 1:37 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
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Title: Midnight Confrontation 28 Oct 2013 2:01 pm
Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, it's very good, but so few characters have been introduced. Also, when brewing potions, you let them simmer.
Title: Midnight Confrontation 19 Mar 2010 10:50 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Cloak! And Map! Uh oh...
Title: Midnight Confrontation 07 Mar 2010 6:39 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha! I love the idea of Severus bowing formally to Hermione - great mental imagery there. I've finally got around to reading again - and I can definitely say that this chapter was worth the wait!

    I wonder if Harry really will get to ride Moon Fire in the end... I can't tell you how many times I've wanted to read a horseanimagus!Severus story - and this one contains everything I'd wanted to read in one ;)
Title: Midnight Confrontation 07 Mar 2010 6:01 am
Reviewer: snapeangel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oops busted!
    lol
    great love it keep it up
Title: Midnight Confrontation 26 Feb 2010 8:53 pm
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Do you think if we all shared our bunny plushies Tommy would be nicer? I don't really have bunnies, but I have some ponies and teddy bears!

    Author's Response: LOL! You know, I don't know if Tommy ever learned to share . . .he probably stole all the other kiddies plushies and hid them in his closet . . .
Title: Midnight Confrontation 26 Feb 2010 6:12 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww I wanted to see who the enemies were! This is awesome!

    Hope you're feeling better!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I am now.  You'll see who the enemies are in my new chapter I've posted.
Title: Midnight Confrontation 26 Feb 2010 5:48 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you're feeling better now and that you posted the next part soon because I really want to know what happened. This is a wonderful story, I love it!

    Author's Response: Aww thanks! That makes me feel lots better and I've posted my new chapter so please R & R!
Title: Midnight Confrontation 26 Feb 2010 5:46 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved how Snape was all nasty and then he showed his caring side by taking care of Harry's burn. He's starting to see the light.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I enjoyed writing that part and yes, a clue has begun to dawn in Snape's cunning brain.
Title: Midnight Confrontation 25 Feb 2010 10:40 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    While it wasn't nice of Severus to take Harry's cloak, I perfectly understand why he did. He is trying to protect Harry in a way, by limiting his ability to wander at night. I wonder if Hermione is right about Severus giving it back after a weeks time?

    It's hard to find out that your assumptions are way off the mark, particularly when you have used them as an excuse to dislike and pick on someone. I hope that Severus will be able to break through Harry's wall of distrust and find out the truth about his home life.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, that's true. I always thought it purely irresponsible of AD to give Harry that cloak as a firstie. I mean, what else would a kid use that FOR if not to get into trouble??

    She is, Severus will not keep those items, though he may confiscate them again if Harry misuses them.

    Yes and that truth will be coming soon. Thanks again. Hope you enjoy the next one!


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