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Reviews For Moon Fire
(end of quick reviewing - up here I have read the story on my iphone during last two days .-) Mila
pretty obvious that severus wants to be sure he can do what he needs to do if he finds potters home life isn't peaches and cream like he had (and everyone else) always thought it was love how this is going!
erg maybe Sev will take Harry with him? Author's Response: It's frustrating isn't it? Yes, that's a very good possibility.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Aww thanks! You're right, he does!
Author's Response: Oh something bad will happen to them trust me! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Author's Response: You're right. He does want Harry out of there and he will eventually offer him the sanctuary of his home. Thanks!
I think you nailed the conversation. Harry's reluctance is spot on, Dumbledore's a lackwit, and Snape... well, I don't think you could have made Snape more perfect. Author's Response: Could be. Thanks so much! That conversation was really hard to write because I didn't want to give too much away.
Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you like what happens next. Definitely he doesn't want Harry at Privet Drive any longer. |
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