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Title: Midnight Visitor 29 May 2010 6:47 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    A-ha! Was that child who I think it was? Very clever, very clever. Kudos on a well written chapter.
Title: Midnight Visitor 19 Mar 2010 3:25 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    ah is the girls Selene? Since she rides so well and cause she kinda appears out of no where........
Title: Midnight Visitor 16 Mar 2010 10:05 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool IS the child Selene? Oh I hope I see more soon I love your writing style...

    Author's Response: Maybe. You'll find out her identity later in the story, when Harry does. Thanks so much and please keep reading!
Title: Midnight Visitor 15 Mar 2010 7:59 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I have a feeling that Harry just met Selene and that he cannot speak of her to Severus because he hasn't made his choice yet or something along those lines. I wonder if Harry will figure it out?

    I'm glad that he is beginning to truly enjoy riding and catching on to the finer details of it.

    Great chapter!
Title: Midnight Visitor 15 Mar 2010 9:55 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the interaction between sev and harry. Great chapter. Please posst soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have just posted a new chapter!
Title: Midnight Visitor 15 Mar 2010 9:32 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow! I suppose she is Selene herself? looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Well, you never know! Just posted a new chapter!
Title: Midnight Visitor 15 Mar 2010 7:13 am
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was rather exciting. I enjoyed the meeting with the little girl and am quite looking forward to what Harry will learn about her. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! You'll be seeing more of her in the next chapter. I have just posted the next one!
Title: Midnight Visitor 15 Mar 2010 5:07 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this fic: your characterisation is good, the plot is original and I think that there's definately a strong arguement to be made for Severus's animagus form being a horse. You might enjoy reading "The Horse" by Elsa2 on FanFiction.Net.
Title: Midnight Visitor 15 Mar 2010 4:17 am
Reviewer: Ash (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to stop right at the beginning of this chapter though I'll be back after I cool off.

    C. Reeve had an accident that had nothing to do with his not wearing a helmet because in fact he did wear one. The helmet prevents brain injuries and not spinal injuries, which is something we actually got to see in his case - his hands got tied together by the reins that were pulled off so he landed head first. He had no brain damage thanks to the helmet but his body weight caused the injury due to impact. Please ... it's really ... very poor taste to even see him mentioned here in this context, implying something like this, considering the poor man went ahead of his time despite taking precautions and after such a valiant fight that helped so many others. Not to mention his wife soon followed from cancer and well just ...

    Author's Response:

    I have nothing whatsoever against Mr. Reeve, in fact I liked the man immensely. I only mentioned him because he was the first person that came to mind that everyone associates with a terrible riding accident. I don't follow much TV and none of the magazines I read regarding that incident went into detail about it and so had no idea what really caused the accident and did not mean to imply that he was incompetent--it was a tragic accident which could have happened to anyone. Like I said, I mentioned it because Harry would have heard of it and it would have made an impact upon him. Severus mentions the fact that one could become paralyzed from a fall without a helmet because he wishes to impress upon Harry to always wear his. I personally know someone who DID almost die from not wearing a hat while jumping a horse, but since neither Severus or Harry are horse people, I didn't want to go into details with it. 

    I also was not aware that his wife died either.  May they rest in peace. 

Title: Midnight Visitor 15 Mar 2010 4:10 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't think it would be possible to get bored. I recced this to Ivy Green

    Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! I appreciate it and hope you like my newest chapter.

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