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Title: Midnight Advice 29 Sep 2014 4:04 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Gee, why don't they stand around and talk for another 20 minutes or maybe an hour, and give more people time to die?
Title: Midnight Advice 19 Mar 2010 9:04 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    That little girl is really smart. I think she's the goddess coming to Harry as a child so he'll trust her. He should listen to her, she's right--Severus does care about him.

    Poor Hermione1 I really want Severus to help her. I hope everything turns out okay! Now I have to read the next part.
Title: Midnight Advice 19 Mar 2010 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful! I loved it! And I'm glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter. I really hope that Sev saves Hermione.
Title: Midnight Advice 19 Mar 2010 4:51 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    The little girl's advice was great and very true. I think she's Selene in disguise. I do hope that Sev can save Hermione. Hurry, Severus!
Title: Midnight Advice 19 Mar 2010 3:26 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I really do think she's Selene cause she's so wise sounding! o.o I hope Sev will be okay, sometimes I don't like Selene either sine her tasks seem to be just as hard as Severus's other 'masters' tasks :(
Title: Midnight Advice 18 Mar 2010 12:29 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter
Title: Midnight Advice 17 Mar 2010 9:16 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    It seems like Harry is beginning to become comfortable with Severus and testing the boundaries of what he can and cannot do and what will happen to him if he pushes Severus. I like how realistic you wrote this stage of their relationship and how you left us hanging worrying about Hermione. Now I am wondering how she will fit into the rest of the story and am excited to see what will happen next.
Title: Midnight Advice 17 Mar 2010 8:33 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    poor harry, not knowing about sev and hermione. You know who the "girl" he was talking to in the paddock reminds me of, Luna, very mystical and a little out there. Please don't leave us hanging too long.
Title: Midnight Advice 17 Mar 2010 5:31 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! I hope that Severus will get there in time to save Hermione. I wonder if she will also become an initiate in time?

    I'm more sure than ever now that the little girl is Selene. She is testing him...judging his heart. I think that talking to her is helping Harry to find focus and to understand Severus better.

    Great chapter!
Title: Midnight Advice 17 Mar 2010 4:14 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the little girl, of course she's probably a century or two old. Maybe she'll keep Harry company until Severus gets back. I know Sev will save Hermione just fine, he's too talented at that sort of thing to not, so I'm thinking about what Selene will have Harry do. For now I'm going to see if I've already asked you for some of your Selene sources. She sounds SO familiar, like I've already knew about her under a different name, but when I do a search on her I get the Latina singer.

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